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“Are you sure about that? I mean they’ll just… freak out” Shane pointed out.
“They need to know” Bette reasoned.
“Alright”
“Coop… … … … yeah we’re on our way, you just hang in there… … … … … yeah… … … … roger, see you soon” Bette disconnected the call as she was also on her cellphone. “All back-up teams assigned to the DA’s offices this is agent Porter, we have a go… I repeat we have a go… I want those six floors sealed, I want the whole fucking building sealed… no one goes in and no one gets out… and also set a perimeter”
“Roger that Agent Porter, what’s your ETA?” Came the response from the walkie-talkie.
“Fifteen minutes”
“Copied that”
At that moment Shane also finished her call.
“So how are they?” Bette asked really anxious, this not going unnoticed of course.
“They are fine, just a little bit shaken that’s all… even you have to admit that bringing the bird was kind of… theatrical?”
“I know it was, but given the amount of people they sent today… it was clearly necessary” Bette replied and the other brunette just nodded her consent. “Did you brief Dana about the situation at the DA’s offices?” Bette asked and Shane simply nodded again. “Good, Dane is the best one to be with them at this moment… she’s always had these amazing skills with people, I will never understand how she does it” Bette added while still maneuvering through traffic.
“I wouldn’t be so sure about that anymore” Shane said almost above a whisper.
“Did you say something?”
“Nope, not at all” Shane replied trying to sound convincing and given the circumstances succeeding at it.
“We should be there in ten, get the gear ready” Bette ordered more concentrated in the task at hand than in her partner’s words.
“Alright” Shane simply replied as she unfastened her seatbelt and quickly jumped to the back seats of the Range Rover. She quickly started to load and remove the safeties of different types of guns, making sure there was enough ammo to shoot several rounds of each gun.
“Ok, we’re here” Bette announced as the car stopped right in front of the DA’s offices.
“Wait what?!” Helena asked in true horror.
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Awesome update… had me at the edge of my seat the whole time. You do write well. Please keep the chapters coming. Thank you!
I’ve missed quite a few chapters on this story, absolutely live it and I am hoping both Peggy, Shane and Bette will be ok. I wonder how Tina will greet Bette if she comes back un injured and completely unharmed.
Just read all your updates on this story thank you absolutely excellent
Great job, now you have to post quickly cause I want to know what happens. Thanks
Really interesting,good job.Please not too much drama.PPS
great update. talk about action…you nailed it.
All caught up…I clicked ‘next post by author’ and got nothing, Dang it!!!!!!! PPVS!
Whoa!! Anne…! You left me baffled here :-O I do hope you will post the next chapters soon!! ;-) and how could you worry about the way you write it?! You know what they said-there’s always a first time for everything :-D and you, my friend, just do it so perfectly amazing!! I don’t think anyone would believe your confession about being your first time writing this kind of action story ;-) I hope there’s another update from you soon, regardless how great is the Monday for you ;-) and let me thank you again for this update and for sharing the story that make me sit on the edge and still I asked for some more :-)
Great update. Great story. Why in the world couldn’t they have caught these guys before they entered the building? You are doing such a great job with this story. Thanks for coming back to complete it. Enjoying it so much. PPS. Thanks.
Well, my Monday improved considerably, but now I´m hanging from that seat again..Peggy is my all time favourite..you know you have to post asap – please.
Hope they will be ok