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As the young man was listening to those words he reached his destination, after all they were only a few steps away. He pushed a very big red button and the huge gates from the back of the plane started opening. The noise and wind were overwhelmingly intense and both Bette and Shane locked eyes at that moment, knowing that they didn’t have much time left.
“So… my dear VERY dear Elizabeth… what is it that you have to say to me?” The dark haired man said now locking eyes with her, and this time what he saw scared him for he had never seen such intensity and fire in someone else’s eyes.
Marco Cruz was a very well-known drug dealer who got to run one of the most powerful cartels in Colombia, at least until the FBI sent Bette Porter and her team after him.
Bette and her people had managed to set up an operation that not only hunted down most of his associates but also left him on the verge of being broke. This was his final attempt to re-build his finances and re-establish his name in the drug markets. That was why he was forced to come out of his hiding place and hop on a plane full of drugs hoping to be able to get to Mexico where his buyers were awaiting his triumphal arrival. Now seeing that the situation had not turned out to be what he expected he realized that his last resource was jumping off the plane, but hopefully not without harming her enemy and killing one of them.
“Si le haces daño, juro que voy a matar a toda tu familia. No voy a dejar a nadie vivo, ni a tu madre, ni a tu padre… ni a tu hijo Pedro” Bette said in perfect Spanish, very slowly and clear as to be heard and understood leaving no room for doubts, unlimited fierce and complete lack of empathy imprinted in her eyes.
Clearly what Marco saw in those deep brown pools that Bette had for eyes was something different, something else, something that got even him scared and that’s when it happened. That’s when he made the worst mistake he could possibly make, he hesitated.
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lodeerca says
Nice. What happened to the “Original..”?
mette hartmann says
Very intriguing beginning…just wondering about “Original of..”
didi1956 says
Glad you are back.Great start,please continue.
favcouple says
Wonderful thank you. Also missing “Original of …..”
bette.porter.fan says
I like it so continue please
elizabeth15 says
Hey so good that you are back nice story I think that ia going to be great but what happen to your other story original of … I hope that you post soon
aseancat says
intriguing start, …
aseancat says
intriguing start, …
ut says
That was very interesting and like it, please post more, thanks!
talaula says
Another must read!!!! Thank you anne83 😘
Tibetter24 says
Fantastic I really like where this is going
akalittlered says
Love it!!! PPS
ally4cleo says
This is interesting please continue.
nicknacks131 says
Normally a silent reader. Please continue, I love this 1st chapter.
wkm says
Please continued, loved it.
mckenzie04 says
welcome back anne83! very good start, please more soon. and i hope that you also will continue to write Original of the Species, love that story of yours