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“Dane go check on the pilots and make sure you take control of this freaking plane this time” Bette commanded to Dana through the small devices they used to communicate.
“Roger” Was all Dana answered as she started to move carefully around the cargo plane, avoiding to be seen and in full attention mode, in case there were more bad guys hiding in between the huge piles of big boxes containing drugs, that were carefully wrapped and placed all around the back of the plane.
“This is it Marco! It’s you and me, and you have no way of escaping this time so PUT YOUR GUN DOWN” Bette shouted to the guy that was still holding her friend.
“No no no no no… you got it aaaalll wrong Elizabeth… I get to win, see I’m wearing a parachute and I WILL jump. But not before shooting this one here… let’s see how you like that you fucking bitch” He shouted back and as he was saying those last words he released Shane while still pointing his gun straight behind her head. Shane could feel the cold metal touching her skull and she knew this was it, she understood that this was how she was going to die.
“Tell Carmen I love her” Shane said really serious and with no fear in her eyes.
“Oh Marco… Marco… haven’t you learnt ANYTHING about me? Are you really THAT stupid?” Bette shouted and winked at her friend as it seemed to be working since the guy stopped what he was about to do and looked at Bette once again from behind Shane’s shoulder.
“And what would that be uh?” He said as he grabbed Shane’s shoulder and moved her with him, using her as a human shield.
Bette I got to the cabin, there’s no one else we’ve taken everybody. The pilots are under control and in a minute or so I’m gonna take this plane out of automatic pilot… let me know when you’re ready Dana said to Bette through her ear device.
“Roger” Bette said as she kept on looking straight at her friend, still pointing her gun towards them, waiting for a chance to take the shot.
“That I will… and you may wanna look at me when I say this” Bette said extremely serious, waiting for the guy to actually make eye contact with her from behind Shane’s shoulder.
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lodeerca says
Nice. What happened to the “Original..”?
mette hartmann says
Very intriguing beginning…just wondering about “Original of..”
didi1956 says
Glad you are back.Great start,please continue.
favcouple says
Wonderful thank you. Also missing “Original of …..”
bette.porter.fan says
I like it so continue please
elizabeth15 says
Hey so good that you are back nice story I think that ia going to be great but what happen to your other story original of … I hope that you post soon
aseancat says
intriguing start, …
aseancat says
intriguing start, …
ut says
That was very interesting and like it, please post more, thanks!
talaula says
Another must read!!!! Thank you anne83 😘
Tibetter24 says
Fantastic I really like where this is going
akalittlered says
Love it!!! PPS
ally4cleo says
This is interesting please continue.
nicknacks131 says
Normally a silent reader. Please continue, I love this 1st chapter.
wkm says
Please continued, loved it.
mckenzie04 says
welcome back anne83! very good start, please more soon. and i hope that you also will continue to write Original of the Species, love that story of yours