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Twisted Triangles ch.10
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“Hey, whoa. I gotcha.” Shane, my hero she caught me right as my ***** was about to introduced to the floor. “You alright? Bette?” This ones a sweetheart.
“Yeah, Im fine. Way to go Alice, I coul-” But she was gone, headed toward the coat check room with her keys in her hand. “*****, Shane could you..”
“Yeah I know, Ill go get her, talk to her.” And she left already knowing what I needed without me having to tell her. Hopefully will do a better job of putting out that fire better than I could.
Alright, now that, I have officially alienated everyone I came in here with. The best thing for me to do is just quietly sit here with my drink and make sure that they stay out of trouble. Ok maybe only Eric, I dont think Alice would appreciate me even glancing at her right now.
I cant believe how much time has passed, its already 12. Well Eric has finally let Tina, Tina, Tina, have to remember its Tina, not Christina. Anyway hes finally let her go and Im not sure that was the smartest thing to do. Shes fresh meat to these piranhas. Some are licking their lips and slowly following her. And some are giving Eric this evil eye. Ill let him handle it. But he really should have let one of the girls go with her to the bathroom. Not me because I dont think she likes me very much. Still dont know why. Maybe Grace could have gone with her. Where is Grace, really?
A few moments, it had to be only like a couple of more minutes before I scanned for Eric and Tina again. But she still wasnt with him. Some other girls was. Where was Tina? Dont know and dont care. Because this new girl is saying something that is making Eric a big cranky pants. “Cranky Pants” dont ask I dont now where that came from either. It doesnt matter, hes starting to raise his voice. And as one of the only men in here, its pretty noticeable.
“What?!!! what did you say? Is that right? What the *****? Who are you? You are? Is that right? Well FUUUUCK YOUUUU *****!!!”
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Damn, that was way good dirl! I cannot wait for more you really hit both characters b & t with the POV..Love it!
WOO! That was incredible! And funny? Uh…YEAH! It craked me up! I loved the part where Bette said ‘…if you asked me what my name was I couldn’t tell you. Yes I could, it would be: ‘Tina’s Bitch.’ LMAO!!! You are a riot Laurelite! Ths story is priceless! Keep up the good work!
Moonshadow is right..funny. Bette being “Tina’s Bitch” Hilarious. great story. post soon
Have read all the chapters and had to comment. I love this story. I am glad you posted you made my day and as working in a club, I totally can feel how a great descripion between the two as i see it on a reg basis. Please post soon!!
K
I agree with the others, very funny and hot. Love this. Can’t wait for more.
Hey I’m still catching up reading Whoa! I love it Tina Bitch LOL! Yes that was so funny Please post soon.
Good chapter. This is so funny Bette’s Tina’s bitch, and hot on the dance floor. Can’t wait to see Tina call Bette. Post soon, thanks!
great!!!!!!!!!!!!! please post soon
Phew! Is it me or is it hot in here?
Absolutely superb, let the foreplay continue.
da onlyest thing i can say GOD DAMN!!! i have never read such a beautiful and pants watering story please 4 da luv of dis site write sum more. GOD DAMN!!!!