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Twisted Triangles ch.10
*****, not good. God if mom were around she would be so disappointed in him right now. Christ, now securitys getting involved.
“Hey, not so rough” Alice is swinging in the direction of this huge woman who is physically carrying Eric out. At least shes got the fight back in her.
“Alice.. Al-. Oh *****, stop, stop!!” Shane is about to bust a gut laughing at Alice ineffectively swinging her tiny purse at the guard. Id laugh too, but you know someone has to be serious. So I figure that I have to use this momentary happiness to calm this chick down. Shes being carried out too, to a thunderous applause by the club goers. Damn they must hate her. But as we get outside theyre still arguing and the bouncers are threatening to call the police. Shane pulls one of them aside. And Alice yanks Eric away before he advances on the girl again. Ok Breathe Bette, its only the first night. They cant possibly be like that all the time. Maybe we all had too much to drink. I guess its up to me to calm this chick down. Because she is not calming down on her own.
“Yeah, you better walk away, you Son a *****. I will ***** you up. And after that, Ill ***** your GIRL too. Sideways, backwards and standing up. So much shell forget your name. ***** YOU *****!!!” God, this girl really has no class. She doesnt even see me standing in front of her shes too busy trying to provoke Eric, which Alice has to physically restrain. He does not look pleased that Im off with this girl.
“BETTE?!! BETTE!! Where are going? What are you doing?” I have to pretend I dont hear him. And pretend that Alice isnt staring daggers at me right now. Its not as if I want the chick, who just called my mother a *****. Im just trying to keep my brother from going to jail right now.
“Do you want to take a walk?” I ask her the sexiest voice I can throw towards this woman without throwing up.
“Sure. I need a cigarette, anyway. Walk with me.” She says cheerily. Like nothing ever happened. This is a strange town. Anyway, whatever keeps you away from him. Erics still yelling in the background, but he sounds like hes calmed down a bit. “Tracy.”
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(15 votes, average: 4.40 out of 5)
Damn, that was way good dirl! I cannot wait for more you really hit both characters b & t with the POV..Love it!
WOO! That was incredible! And funny? Uh…YEAH! It craked me up! I loved the part where Bette said ‘…if you asked me what my name was I couldn’t tell you. Yes I could, it would be: ‘Tina’s Bitch.’ LMAO!!! You are a riot Laurelite! Ths story is priceless! Keep up the good work!
Moonshadow is right..funny. Bette being “Tina’s Bitch” Hilarious. great story. post soon
Have read all the chapters and had to comment. I love this story. I am glad you posted you made my day and as working in a club, I totally can feel how a great descripion between the two as i see it on a reg basis. Please post soon!!
K
I agree with the others, very funny and hot. Love this. Can’t wait for more.
Hey I’m still catching up reading Whoa! I love it Tina Bitch LOL! Yes that was so funny Please post soon.
Good chapter. This is so funny Bette’s Tina’s bitch, and hot on the dance floor. Can’t wait to see Tina call Bette. Post soon, thanks!
great!!!!!!!!!!!!! please post soon
Phew! Is it me or is it hot in here?
Absolutely superb, let the foreplay continue.
da onlyest thing i can say GOD DAMN!!! i have never read such a beautiful and pants watering story please 4 da luv of dis site write sum more. GOD DAMN!!!!