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    Twisted Triangles ch.10

    Story written on July 10, 2005 by Laurelite.
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    Alice makes the wrong move. Eric gets kicked out. Bette and Tina get down on the dance floor. Body Shots for all!!

    “Dontcha” goes off. Thank God. I dont think either of us was ready for that song. But hey, because it appears to be “***** With Bette Day” and at this point, I dont care. “Criminal” comes on. A dance version of it. Ugh. But still, I love this song. And I dont know when, but I got into it big time. I turned Tina around so her back was to me. God she feels so good. I had to get closer. “Bette, Bette, what are you doing” Ahh, what the *****, what is Erics voice doing in my head? Oh right, Tina. Say something. I wanted to make sure that she heard he over the music, so I got close to her ear, brushing my lips against it. By accident of course.

    “Id promised Eric, Id look after you.” Not really, but Im promising this Eric voice so it can get out of my head. She stiffened slightly at the mention of his name. But then she shivered. I dont think that had anything to do with Eric. Something was starting here. And the Eric voice couldnt do a damn thing about it.

    Oh help me but dont tell me

    to deny it

    Ive got to cleanse myself

    of all these lies till Im good

    enough for him

    so Im beggin you before it ends

    just tell me where to begin.

    By the time the second verse came along her head had found its way to my shoulder and we were locked in a full body press. God, this felt right, too right. For a straight girl and me, anyway. And a girl that likes Eric. I hope Alice cant see this. She would have a heart attack. The whole crowd seemed to have mellowed over Fionas voice. Everyones slow dancing. Dance Version be damned. It seems to be making Tina more comfortable with me. I really am trying to keep my distance from her, but every time I move back, she moves forward, closing the distance. That is until the song ends and a faster and far sexier one blares through the speakers. Her body stiffened, she backed away, all the while looking in my eyes. It was kind of cute, her not knowing what to do, looking for some way out. Might as well challenge her to get her to stay.

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    2. WOO! That was incredible! And funny? Uh…YEAH! It craked me up! I loved the part where Bette said ‘…if you asked me what my name was I couldn’t tell you. Yes I could, it would be: ‘Tina’s Bitch.’ LMAO!!! You are a riot Laurelite! Ths story is priceless! Keep up the good work!

    4. Have read all the chapters and had to comment. I love this story. I am glad you posted you made my day and as working in a club, I totally can feel how a great descripion between the two as i see it on a reg basis. Please post soon!!

    10. da onlyest thing i can say GOD DAMN!!! i have never read such a beautiful and pants watering story please 4 da luv of dis site write sum more. GOD DAMN!!!!

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