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Twisted Triangles ch.10
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“Well cheers” Shane says. Well all toast and toss back our drinks. Damn thats exactly what I needed. Yeah my buzz is back. Yeah, this is why I came out tonight. To hang out with my friend and meet new ones. Good. Good. The night may not be ruined.
Alice said something about a buzz. I cant really hear her, though all I hear is the music. “Dontchas” playing. God that song just started to get big back home. I love that song. Wait everyones standing up… I think. I dont know whats going on, I missed part of the conversation. Grace is whispering something to Tina while looking frantic. It cant be that bad dancing with Alice. I was just about to rescue her when Tina whispered something to her about pumping and Grace ran off.
Whatever she said to Grace must have worried her, because she looks really confused right now. “You ok?”
“Im fine.” she didnt look fine. “So, is anybody gonna tell me what happened to Eric?”
I really didnt want to talk about him right now. That subject will destroy my buzz. Cant let that happen again. “Can we just skip the heavy stuff and have him tell you tomorrow?” Please say yes, please say yes.
“But Bette, he looked like he was about to hit a girl. Is he usually like that?” No, he isnt. But it still isnt my place to explain his insecure behavior to her. Shell just have to ask him herself.
“Would you like to dance?” End of discussion let it go.
“What about Shane?” I have to smile and point out to her that there is no Shane. She left before Alice and Grace. After some girl I guess. For a second she looked like a deer caught in headlights. But I held my hand out to her and she takes it gingerly. I feel like I have to be careful with her. Something around her seems so strong. But tonight, right now holding my hand, she relaxes. Her energy anyway. She feels like a…. I dont know, something soft, fragile. Ill protect her. I will. I push my way through the crowd, making a way for her to maneuver behind me easier.
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Damn, that was way good dirl! I cannot wait for more you really hit both characters b & t with the POV..Love it!
WOO! That was incredible! And funny? Uh…YEAH! It craked me up! I loved the part where Bette said ‘…if you asked me what my name was I couldn’t tell you. Yes I could, it would be: ‘Tina’s Bitch.’ LMAO!!! You are a riot Laurelite! Ths story is priceless! Keep up the good work!
Moonshadow is right..funny. Bette being “Tina’s Bitch” Hilarious. great story. post soon
Have read all the chapters and had to comment. I love this story. I am glad you posted you made my day and as working in a club, I totally can feel how a great descripion between the two as i see it on a reg basis. Please post soon!!
K
I agree with the others, very funny and hot. Love this. Can’t wait for more.
Hey I’m still catching up reading Whoa! I love it Tina Bitch LOL! Yes that was so funny Please post soon.
Good chapter. This is so funny Bette’s Tina’s bitch, and hot on the dance floor. Can’t wait to see Tina call Bette. Post soon, thanks!
great!!!!!!!!!!!!! please post soon
Phew! Is it me or is it hot in here?
Absolutely superb, let the foreplay continue.
da onlyest thing i can say GOD DAMN!!! i have never read such a beautiful and pants watering story please 4 da luv of dis site write sum more. GOD DAMN!!!!