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Twisted Triangles ch.24
“Wow, you’re bossy. I like it. Are you that way in the bedroom too?” I ask hopefully, with a hint of playfulness.
“Yes I am.” she says to me, stopping our dance to think about something before she met my eyes again. “So should we continue this dance this ***** dance of love as you call it. God that is so corny.” She’s laughing at my choice of words. Really giggling on my shoulder. So before it turns into a full blown laugh, I try to pull her back in to the moment, the dance.
“Shut and dance with me Tina.” She stilled her movements after I said that. What did I see? Want? Desire? Fire? All of those things again flashing in her eyes. This time burning hotter than ever before. But she didn’t say anything. Just laid her head of my shoulder and took in the music as it was winding down.
A passion in your caress,
floats from your fingertips and I pray for the day,
that I hear those precious words pass through your lips
wishin upon the start, from up above..uhh
that soon you’ll love at me baby, and say
im the one that you love
Kit sang a few more songs for the crowd and they changed the tempo once or twice during her set. Tina and I never stopped our slow dance. Only after Kit was done, did we notice that our bodies were over heating from just touching each other lightly. There was no outward displays of affections. In fact you could day we were the most PG couple on the floor. But when we got the bar again, it was a different story.
I’d like to say the Tina started it. She did touch my face lovingly with her hand. Stroking my hair, not saying a word, but telling a really long story with her eyes. So it was my fault that I kissed her. Ok it wasn’t as tender as the first, or careful, or you know decent. It was that damn hormonal thing I was thinking about earlier. Her eyes, her lips, her touch, it drove me nuts. And the deeper the kiss got , the more frantic our hands became. I felt an audience for a second, but then I felt that familiar ascent up my leg, then my stomach, and the crowd was gone again. Tina let out a deep satisfied moan before pulling away to catch her breath.
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(17 votes, average: 4.29 out of 5)
Blood is not a good sign.. Grace is SO DEAD!!! I think I’ll take care of her myself just so B&T can be together with no outside sources intruding. Can’t wait for more
Ok, so i just read every chapter and holy shit. This is a great story and I cannot wait to find out what happens to Tina. Was it Alice that threw the cup at her? Anyway please post soon.
I for one like reading both POV’s. Grace is abit of a pshycho, what would she do if Bette were her girlfriend. After what has happened I don’t know how Bette ends up with Grace.
Damn this is sad and I hate Grace now. Hope Tina ok, post soon please, thanks!
Oh No! What the hell! Gracie is an azzhole!!! Kill her off please :) I’ll put you and your Bro in my good thoughts!
I’ve read this before, why post it twice? Hmm Well I still love it. Please post soon.
*gasp!* :D i luv this story. keep it up!
oh yeah. first!
OH MY GOD!!! I KNEW IT DAT BITCH GRACE CUT HER. PLEASE GET RID OF HER IN A MOST RIGHTGEOUS WAY!!! BUT I DO LOVE THE WAY YOU SPLIT THINGS PLEASE CONTINUE, IT’S UNIQUE AND QUITE INTERESTING. HOPEFULLY IT’S SUMTHIN MINOR N HER AND BETTE WILL BE 2GETHER SOON. PLEASE FOR HEAVEN’S SAKE POST SOON!! PEACE!!!
yeah I agree with lauren, there is no need to read every chapter twice. although I do like reading both T and B’s thoughts, can you maybe put them in the same post? just a suggestion to move the story along, especially since so much time goes by between posts.
with that said, I love your story. It is one of those unique stories that just pulls you in. please post soon
One thing I love about Laurel is that her chapters are not short…..so I say, bring on the next one!!! And since Tina is on the floor again, and bleeding this time, make the bouncer do his job and detain Grace from leaving….just in case we need to press charges!!
ok blood what?? continue soon!!
nice story, quit teasing us and tells us what happen with tina rather than changing POV, ur such a tease, thanx for the post.
THANKS FOR ACTING SICK AND BLOWING OFF WORK FOR THIS CHAPTER BABE, I LOVE IT, AND YOU BLOWING OFF WORK FOR THIS STORY MAKES ME LOVE U EVEN MORE! LAURELITE WOO HOO