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Twisted Triangles ch.24
“Oh come on. You have to dance to this with me.” I was wrong. She heard this song.
“Come on Tina. ‘Between the Sheets’ it’s so predictable.”
“What’s the matter. Afraid of what’s gonna happen?” She started to disappear in to the crowd, her eyes never leaving mine. Giving me the ‘come hither’ look. What’s a girl to do?
“Fine. Just don’t take advantage of me.”
“Oh please.”
Ooh, girl, let me hold you tight
And you know I’ll make you feel alright
Oh, baby girl, just cling to me and let your mind be free
While makin’ love between the sheets
“Remind you anything?” I need for her to remember to first time. Maybe there would be no interruptions this time.
“No, cause you’re not doing it right. I believe your hand was here.” she slowly guided her hands over the length of her body and planted them over her *****.
“Like this?” Licking her ear, I felt her body shiver and falter for the hundredth time tonight. Maybe I wasn’t the only one getting a little flustered by all this dancing.
“All you gotta do is say yes, T.”
“God yes.” And at this point I want to look for Shane, or Kit, or a stranger to get a ride home. I need her more than I realized.
“Bette?”
“Yes.”
“We should stop.”
“We should stop….. But I want this…..and tonight I want you.”
“That’s not how it went.”
Ooh, girl, let me hold you tight
And you know I’ll make you feel alright
Oh, baby girl, just cling to me and let your mind be free
While makin’ love between the sheets
“I don’t give a ***** about how we said it then Tina. It doesn’t ch…..change…. oh God…that I still….”
“Want me.” Good, we’re on the same page. And Ron Isley’s words tickle our senses. The close proximity we have to each other, making our breaths come in short struggled breaths.
“God yes.” She manages to get out. I need room to breathe, but I also need to feel her so absolutely. I turn her around so her back is to me and I can get close enough to grab both of her ***** with abandon. God she has no ***** clue how good this feels to me.
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(17 votes, average: 4.29 out of 5)
Blood is not a good sign.. Grace is SO DEAD!!! I think I’ll take care of her myself just so B&T can be together with no outside sources intruding. Can’t wait for more
Ok, so i just read every chapter and holy shit. This is a great story and I cannot wait to find out what happens to Tina. Was it Alice that threw the cup at her? Anyway please post soon.
I for one like reading both POV’s. Grace is abit of a pshycho, what would she do if Bette were her girlfriend. After what has happened I don’t know how Bette ends up with Grace.
Damn this is sad and I hate Grace now. Hope Tina ok, post soon please, thanks!
Oh No! What the hell! Gracie is an azzhole!!! Kill her off please :) I’ll put you and your Bro in my good thoughts!
I’ve read this before, why post it twice? Hmm Well I still love it. Please post soon.
*gasp!* :D i luv this story. keep it up!
oh yeah. first!
OH MY GOD!!! I KNEW IT DAT BITCH GRACE CUT HER. PLEASE GET RID OF HER IN A MOST RIGHTGEOUS WAY!!! BUT I DO LOVE THE WAY YOU SPLIT THINGS PLEASE CONTINUE, IT’S UNIQUE AND QUITE INTERESTING. HOPEFULLY IT’S SUMTHIN MINOR N HER AND BETTE WILL BE 2GETHER SOON. PLEASE FOR HEAVEN’S SAKE POST SOON!! PEACE!!!
yeah I agree with lauren, there is no need to read every chapter twice. although I do like reading both T and B’s thoughts, can you maybe put them in the same post? just a suggestion to move the story along, especially since so much time goes by between posts.
with that said, I love your story. It is one of those unique stories that just pulls you in. please post soon
One thing I love about Laurel is that her chapters are not short…..so I say, bring on the next one!!! And since Tina is on the floor again, and bleeding this time, make the bouncer do his job and detain Grace from leaving….just in case we need to press charges!!
ok blood what?? continue soon!!
nice story, quit teasing us and tells us what happen with tina rather than changing POV, ur such a tease, thanx for the post.
THANKS FOR ACTING SICK AND BLOWING OFF WORK FOR THIS CHAPTER BABE, I LOVE IT, AND YOU BLOWING OFF WORK FOR THIS STORY MAKES ME LOVE U EVEN MORE! LAURELITE WOO HOO