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Twisted Triangles ch.24
“Bette, ooooh Bette. This isn’t my kitchen…. we’re in public…..people are….” She can’t find the words. I know people are watching. I know that they’ll talk about us in the morning. By morning it’ll be the gossip all over this small neighborhood. How the girl from Philly came in and not only took a girl from her twin brother, but took a straight girl. Again, after Tina’s admission of love, I couldn’t give flying ***** what these idiots said. Naturally Tina needs to know that too.
“People are jealous.”
“T…..”
Hey, girl, what’s your fantasy
I’ll take you there to that ecstasy
Ooh, girl, you blow my mind, I’ll always be your freak
Let’s make sweet love between the sheets
“T…. tell me…. tell me what you want.”
“You.”
“Tell me……what you… need.”
“…..Only you.”
“Do you love me?”
“…..Do… you love me?”
“Yes.” we both answer.
Her body starts to seductively slide down my body. Her hair clip falling to fall, her hair do falling and tickling my face and then the top of my chest. She’s like a cat with a scratching post, or a bear relieving in inch against a tree. So slow, so *****, so mine. The only thing I can do is watch and feel and wait, for whatever comes next.
“Let’s go back to your place.” I say when she reaches me again.
You got me moanin’
Girl, you got me groanin’
I’m comin’, comin’ on strong {Sweet darlin’}
In between the sheets
“Right Alice will be at yours, right?”
“Exactly.” I respond finally after moments of being rooted to one spot as Tina had her way with my body. She never did much, but the act of just moving against me, was sufficient enough to keep me temporarily paralyzed.
We turned to leave and the crowd finally looked away, pretending that they weren’t gawking at West Hollywood’s newest couple. What we didn’t count on was to face two faces that were impossible to read. Hopefully it’s not too bad.
“Holy *****!!!!!” “What the *****!!!!!” Grace and Eric screamed. That was plenty for me to stop breathing, it wasn’t until Grace lunged for Tina and I was picked up by a bodyguard, that I snapped out of it.
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(17 votes, average: 4.29 out of 5)
Blood is not a good sign.. Grace is SO DEAD!!! I think I’ll take care of her myself just so B&T can be together with no outside sources intruding. Can’t wait for more
Ok, so i just read every chapter and holy shit. This is a great story and I cannot wait to find out what happens to Tina. Was it Alice that threw the cup at her? Anyway please post soon.
I for one like reading both POV’s. Grace is abit of a pshycho, what would she do if Bette were her girlfriend. After what has happened I don’t know how Bette ends up with Grace.
Damn this is sad and I hate Grace now. Hope Tina ok, post soon please, thanks!
Oh No! What the hell! Gracie is an azzhole!!! Kill her off please :) I’ll put you and your Bro in my good thoughts!
I’ve read this before, why post it twice? Hmm Well I still love it. Please post soon.
*gasp!* :D i luv this story. keep it up!
oh yeah. first!
OH MY GOD!!! I KNEW IT DAT BITCH GRACE CUT HER. PLEASE GET RID OF HER IN A MOST RIGHTGEOUS WAY!!! BUT I DO LOVE THE WAY YOU SPLIT THINGS PLEASE CONTINUE, IT’S UNIQUE AND QUITE INTERESTING. HOPEFULLY IT’S SUMTHIN MINOR N HER AND BETTE WILL BE 2GETHER SOON. PLEASE FOR HEAVEN’S SAKE POST SOON!! PEACE!!!
yeah I agree with lauren, there is no need to read every chapter twice. although I do like reading both T and B’s thoughts, can you maybe put them in the same post? just a suggestion to move the story along, especially since so much time goes by between posts.
with that said, I love your story. It is one of those unique stories that just pulls you in. please post soon
One thing I love about Laurel is that her chapters are not short…..so I say, bring on the next one!!! And since Tina is on the floor again, and bleeding this time, make the bouncer do his job and detain Grace from leaving….just in case we need to press charges!!
ok blood what?? continue soon!!
nice story, quit teasing us and tells us what happen with tina rather than changing POV, ur such a tease, thanx for the post.
THANKS FOR ACTING SICK AND BLOWING OFF WORK FOR THIS CHAPTER BABE, I LOVE IT, AND YOU BLOWING OFF WORK FOR THIS STORY MAKES ME LOVE U EVEN MORE! LAURELITE WOO HOO