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Twisted Triangles ch. 40
“Damn, I would hate to be on your bad side TK.” Alice pronounces holding her glass up for a salute to Tina.
“I second that.” Shane adds clinking her glass to Alice’s.
“You shouldn’t have done that Tina.” Grace adds. All the easy going banter that was about to begin, now has no chance of starting. I knew this was a bad idea. No scratch that, Alice told me that this was going to be a very bad idea.
“Why was that bad?”
“Because you know how sensitive he is. Especially about all of this. Look you, Bette, and I may have moved on past you guys’ little thing all those months ago, but I bet that’s all he thinks about when Bette and you are in the same room. It’s just not fair to him.” I knew it was bullshit. The way Alice started to move around in her chair, requiring Shane to restrain her, also knew. I just pray that Grace is just trying to help Tina and she doesn’t believe any of this. As for Tina, her face said it all.
“So what, I’m supposed to do, run after him every time he has a problem with what Bette says to me. Or when I say something to her? Is that what you think I should do, Gracie?”
Clearly she wasn’t picking up on Tina’s rising level of agitation. “Tina calm down.” I stand corrected. “It’s just he’s not that secure in this relationship as much as you want him to be.”
“Fuck that. If he wasn’t secure he shouldn’t have lied to me in New York when he told me that he didn’t care about Bette and I. That he wanted us to be friends. If that was all bullshit then we got big problems.” By now T’s usually angelic face was a mixture of pain and extreme anger. I would guess that right now if Eric walked into the room, she would cry and then rip him a new asshole. But then I could be underestimating her.
“Tina.” Shane interjects between the two friends. “Girl calm down, lets’s just have a nice meal.” Tina looks over at Shane skeptically, while Shane just nods her head in confidence.
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(14 votes, average: 4.57 out of 5)
TARA LIVES. please post soon. PEACE.
please to continue, some time.
well finally you’re back…don’t let s3 and other stories to take you away from your plan…bring B&T together, they belong together…i really liked all the talks between alice and bette and eric..realy funny..i hope B&T will find the way to be together…btw, i’m going to SF ;)
Eric and Gracie must be idiots. Why pursue someone you know is inlove with your best friend/sister. Tina and Bette are stupid too they should never got involved with Eric and Gracie. T&B should just dump them, they don’t need to jump into a relationship with eachother but they need to leave their respective relationships.
jeez the drama its so so damn addicting
“”Al, why do you have to provoke him like that?””Because it’s fun for me.”And for us. Great job with this chapter, Laurelite!
oh man!…i barely leave comments but i jus ave to with this story its tooo good!!!! Al is funny as hell…keep up the good work and post soon PLEASE!!!
They’re torturing themselves and the others. They all know who and who should be together. Then why continue? Tina should make up her mind now, or she just enjoys the awkward and vague situation?
wow i was just thinking about you and your story and wondering what happened to one of my favorites, and here you are (i am doing my happy dance) cant wait for more…luv this story!!!!!!!!!!
This is what we need, pls more of this story!!!
Glad to see you back, Laurelite. That was terrific on many levels: character, dialog, interior monologue; all with a wry sense of humor. But that Eric’s a butthole. How’d he A. get born into the Porter family and B. get Tina at all interested when he is in fact a humorless, short tempered, insecure butthole?
you’re back! have you watched ‘imagine me & you’? well, if you really love somebody, you’ll be able to let them go knowing that it’ll make them happy and it wld be pointless to keep them by your side. that is exactly ehat eric and gracie must do! instead of holding on selfishly to Bette and Tina, making their lives miserable….pls post soon=)PS: are you a Buffy fan?!
Laurelite, I love the relationship that Bette and Tina have in this story as it conveys the emotional journey each of our heroines are on. There is such a wonderful and easy banter between. Such honesty only comes from like safe and secure with someone. Keeping on writing your versions of all the character because I will be here to comment and enjoy their company particularly given the upsetting twists and turns that S3 is taken. This is the beauty of this site. Freedom of choice to post your story and freedom of the reader to view them. But you must get Bette and Tina back together as their unions with Grace and Eric will only hurt everyone and result in a bunch of four very unhappy campers. Please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Man I missed thiis story. I always liked it but when U start adding ‘Buffy” quotes. Yhat moves it right up the list. Welcome back and thanks for taking the time to write.
Eric and Grace is driving me crazy and want to kick their ass and tell them to stop bother Bette and Tina. Bette and Tina need to talk more and they need to break up with Eric and Grace soon and be together again. Ok post soon please, thanks!