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Twisted Triangles ch. 40
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“Anyway, Eric figured that even though you were out there, and didn’t want to see any of us, he was pretty neutral. He figured that someone should look after you.”
“It was the right thing to do, Tina. I was worried about you.”
“We all were.” Shane says entering the house as quietly as possible.
“But after he came back, he said he felt more, like a connection to you.”
“For which I told him is was fucking crazy.” Alice chimes in.
“Alice.” Shane says, shaking her head at Alice.
“Which pretty much started what you just saw here tonight. They have been fighting about what is best for you.” I finished embarrassed that I just had to explain my brother’s and best friend immature behavior.
“So this whole thing is because you two think you know what’s best for me?”
“Not just you TK, this one here too.” Alice says pointing to me.
“And what did you think of all this?” Tina asks Grace.
“I told Alice that it wasn’t any of her business. But as usual, she never listens.”
“That’s because I rarely listen to drama queens that also happen to be full of shit.”
“Oh my God, Alice.” Shane replied. I don’t know if anyone else could tell, but she did have a hint of a smile while she admonished Alice. I’m starting to think that Alice is not the only one that wants Tina and I to be together.
“Ok, we’re getting off track. Get to the part where Tina and I got together.” Eric added proudly, rubbing his arm, that I wanted to rip off, over Tina’s arm.
“I can’t help you there, bro. I wasn’t there.” I told them. Even if I heard the story from him, I wasn’t about to tell it.
“No, I want to finish this. Bette, what did you think about all of this between Alice and Eric?” Rock, Hard Place, meet the sides of my head.
“I….I don’t really know Tina. I mean I always felt that what happened between you and I , as well as you and Eric, was private and no one was privy to know anything. Then again, living with these two going on and on about what’s good for all of us, was hell.” There, there’s my truth. I had to edit the hell out of it, true enough. But all those other things said were for Tina’s benefit as well as Eric and Alice.
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TARA LIVES. please post soon. PEACE.
please to continue, some time.
well finally you’re back…don’t let s3 and other stories to take you away from your plan…bring B&T together, they belong together…i really liked all the talks between alice and bette and eric..realy funny..i hope B&T will find the way to be together…btw, i’m going to SF ;)
Eric and Gracie must be idiots. Why pursue someone you know is inlove with your best friend/sister. Tina and Bette are stupid too they should never got involved with Eric and Gracie. T&B should just dump them, they don’t need to jump into a relationship with eachother but they need to leave their respective relationships.
jeez the drama its so so damn addicting
“”Al, why do you have to provoke him like that?””Because it’s fun for me.”And for us. Great job with this chapter, Laurelite!
oh man!…i barely leave comments but i jus ave to with this story its tooo good!!!! Al is funny as hell…keep up the good work and post soon PLEASE!!!
They’re torturing themselves and the others. They all know who and who should be together. Then why continue? Tina should make up her mind now, or she just enjoys the awkward and vague situation?
wow i was just thinking about you and your story and wondering what happened to one of my favorites, and here you are (i am doing my happy dance) cant wait for more…luv this story!!!!!!!!!!
This is what we need, pls more of this story!!!
Glad to see you back, Laurelite. That was terrific on many levels: character, dialog, interior monologue; all with a wry sense of humor. But that Eric’s a butthole. How’d he A. get born into the Porter family and B. get Tina at all interested when he is in fact a humorless, short tempered, insecure butthole?
you’re back! have you watched ‘imagine me & you’? well, if you really love somebody, you’ll be able to let them go knowing that it’ll make them happy and it wld be pointless to keep them by your side. that is exactly ehat eric and gracie must do! instead of holding on selfishly to Bette and Tina, making their lives miserable….pls post soon=)PS: are you a Buffy fan?!
Laurelite, I love the relationship that Bette and Tina have in this story as it conveys the emotional journey each of our heroines are on. There is such a wonderful and easy banter between. Such honesty only comes from like safe and secure with someone. Keeping on writing your versions of all the character because I will be here to comment and enjoy their company particularly given the upsetting twists and turns that S3 is taken. This is the beauty of this site. Freedom of choice to post your story and freedom of the reader to view them. But you must get Bette and Tina back together as their unions with Grace and Eric will only hurt everyone and result in a bunch of four very unhappy campers. Please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Man I missed thiis story. I always liked it but when U start adding ‘Buffy” quotes. Yhat moves it right up the list. Welcome back and thanks for taking the time to write.
Eric and Grace is driving me crazy and want to kick their ass and tell them to stop bother Bette and Tina. Bette and Tina need to talk more and they need to break up with Eric and Grace soon and be together again. Ok post soon please, thanks!