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Uncharted Territory
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Holding the car door she looks around one last time. I don’t feel any of the things that I thought I would.
She gets in and the taxi takes off.
And I? I turn around and take a hold of the doorknob.
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‘I don’t know what I did to deserve this, but I love them. Thank you.’ Tina says turning away from the mirror after admiring the classic South sea cultured pearl ear studs I just gave her. ‘What?’
Closing the book I place it on her side table next to our picture. ‘Hold up your hair for me.’ I demand. It’s that time of night when the moonlight starts to dance. It’s that mystical moment just before one day ends and a new one begins, when she lifts up her hair and exposes her slender neck. ‘Uhuh, just how I pictured it…’
I can’t deny the fact that the right jewelry on a woman is a real turn on. She wears it on her bare skin, where everyone can see it. On places you’d kiss, like the hollow of her throat, the lobes of her ears, the insides of her wrists. Where her pulse beats.
‘I love when you look at me like that.’
Thrilled by the minor tremor in her voice I reach out my hand to her. ‘Come here.’ With just the right look of heat in her eyes she takes my hand and waits. Turning her arm I bend my head. ‘Your skin is so soft.’ I whisper with my lips against her wrist. My free arm possessively slides around her middle and I pull her closer, while trying to temper my longing to have my way with her right away. I look up at her a little lust crazed. ‘Tell me how the rest of your day was.’
Her eyes rest on the lower part of my face as if she’s lip reading. ‘I can’t… not when you want me like this.’
‘Tell me.’
‘What can I say… after you left it was hard to focus again.’ Her luscious body invites my hands to wander further over her deep dips and curves in all the right places, poorly hidden under the silky robe. In absence of a bra to restrict them, her nipples press hard against the material and toy with my restrain.
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Welcome back and congratulations with your upcoming wedding! Did you found the perfect rings?
What a way to come back with this story! They are on the right path and they need to keep talking to each other, about their fears, their feelings, about everything what is troubling them, makes them happy. Show each other by little things how much they love each other.
I am very happy Bette didn’t feel threatened anymore by the woman she got to know by searching Google and Tina cheated on Bette with. Still it will sting and hurt sometimes but their is provement.
Thank you for this chapter!
Bibi! Thank you for the wishes and your comments through out the story. The perfect rings are still waiting to be found but it’s just a matter of time ;).
Many CONGRATS on this fab news!! Thanks for sharing!!
Now leave me be to partake of this chapter
Thank you DumplinT. Hope you enjoyed the chapter. :)
Congratulations! There is nothing better that building a life with the one you love and who loves you in return. May you know a lifetime of happiness.
May Bette and Tina continue to find their way back. It’s still rough for Bette but will hopefully continue to get better. That woman needs to stay away from Tina. Yes, Tina has told her it was a mistake but she needs to continue to be as direct as possible. Oh, and Mrs. Porter was a very nice touch.
Dear Billy. Thank you for your lovely words. And your comment, it means a lot.
Congratulations on your engagement! It was as lovely to hear as seeing this new chapter.
This story is giving me all the feels. I love that Bette doesn’t make herself so sick anymore over that other woman because she is getting more and more confident in her relationship with Tina. She called her Mrs Porter and baby… so lovely <3
Hey Cam!
When are you going to post a new story, we’re eagerly waiting. Tick tack, tick, tack. No pressure. ;)
Thank you for your encouragement!
“Honey, I won’t make it home for dinner we’re about to set Manhattan on fire; I had such an amazing day at work today, we finally killed the mother, it was beautiful; Sorry babe, I gotta run, our monkey’s escaped.”
Bwhahaha – this made me laugh out loud. great chapter and congratulations on the home front!
BK
We’re happy we succeeded to make at least someone laugh with this story haha. Loved your comment, thank you BK!
Ive read all 21 chapters in 2 days, I cried 5 times during it all. I am in awe of this story. It’s honestly so good. <3
Hello Dean,
We’re hoping it doesn’t sound too weird when we say we’re happy and sad at the same time that we made you sad. Not going to appologize though. ;)
Thank you for the uplifting comment!
Besides the rest I particularly loved how you wrote NC-17 scene! How you used jewelry to translate Bette’s layered feelings. This wasn’t sex just for purpose of putting sex in ff, but with a meaning to move story forward. Not to mention that it was hot, far from simplistic description, but truly well written. I don’t think I read similar NC-17 in any other ff.All the ‘ahhhs’, ‘ohhhhs’, ‘yesss’ etc. never bring much to the story for my feeling. Well done!
You are not thinking to finish this story soon, right?
Are you such a troublemaker as your nickname implies?
I’m happy someone noticed the jewelry part, but I don’t share your opinion on NC-17 scenes in other FF’s. There are many amazing writers around here!
Enjoy the next chapter Troublemaker!