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Uncharted Territory
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She replies with a series of hot, uncoherent mews.
Sucking her earlobe with the pearl into my mouth I urge her on. Relentlessly driving into me she grabs my neck her shallow breath patting my shoulder. ‘Come for me.’ I whisper as she sneaks even deeper into my heart. And she obeys as a new day starts.
After coming down from unbearable heights she slides down my body and spreads my legs. And though it’s her who kneels, I confess. ‘I love being your wife.’
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‘James.’ I greet my assistant in a low voice in order not to wake Tina up. Reaching for the coffee cups I smile to myself when my sore muscles remind me about last night.
‘Tell me I’m the best choice you ever made.’ He says with a smile in his voice that persuades any buyer to make a good choice.
‘I won’t.. but I can tell you, you’re getting cockier every day.’
‘Rightfully might I add. The show was a huge success…and every single piece is sold. Can you imagine that… in one night?’ Enthusiastically he starts filling me in about this night’s opening and the crowd’s reaction to the artist that Tina and I visited at his atelier a few months back. Dividing the fresh croissants over two plates I try to imagine the paintings that speak of joie de vivre, of wine yards and chateaus in a modernistic view placed upon white-washed walls in LA, a city that knows neither. Listening to his stories there’s still that sense of pride in me, pride of what I accomplished but at the same time there’s a bittersweet irony of trying to convert the language of my heart into money. But I had to, for a love that goes even deeper than my love for art.
‘That’s amazing James, congratulations. Good job.’
‘Wait, is that a compliment? Let me enjoy it for a second.’ He jokes, oblivious to my mixed feelings.
‘Ha-ha funny.’ Checking my watch I quickly count nine hours back. ‘Why don’t you take the day off tomorrow? Spend time with Julie, do something fun.’
‘I think I will do just that.’
‘Thanks for letting me know. Talk to you soon.’ Switching of the phone I place it back on the counter, pick up the breakfast tray and walk into the bedroom.
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Welcome back and congratulations with your upcoming wedding! Did you found the perfect rings?
What a way to come back with this story! They are on the right path and they need to keep talking to each other, about their fears, their feelings, about everything what is troubling them, makes them happy. Show each other by little things how much they love each other.
I am very happy Bette didn’t feel threatened anymore by the woman she got to know by searching Google and Tina cheated on Bette with. Still it will sting and hurt sometimes but their is provement.
Thank you for this chapter!
Bibi! Thank you for the wishes and your comments through out the story. The perfect rings are still waiting to be found but it’s just a matter of time ;).
Many CONGRATS on this fab news!! Thanks for sharing!!
Now leave me be to partake of this chapter
Thank you DumplinT. Hope you enjoyed the chapter. :)
Congratulations! There is nothing better that building a life with the one you love and who loves you in return. May you know a lifetime of happiness.
May Bette and Tina continue to find their way back. It’s still rough for Bette but will hopefully continue to get better. That woman needs to stay away from Tina. Yes, Tina has told her it was a mistake but she needs to continue to be as direct as possible. Oh, and Mrs. Porter was a very nice touch.
Dear Billy. Thank you for your lovely words. And your comment, it means a lot.
Congratulations on your engagement! It was as lovely to hear as seeing this new chapter.
This story is giving me all the feels. I love that Bette doesn’t make herself so sick anymore over that other woman because she is getting more and more confident in her relationship with Tina. She called her Mrs Porter and baby… so lovely <3
Hey Cam!
When are you going to post a new story, we’re eagerly waiting. Tick tack, tick, tack. No pressure. ;)
Thank you for your encouragement!
“Honey, I won’t make it home for dinner we’re about to set Manhattan on fire; I had such an amazing day at work today, we finally killed the mother, it was beautiful; Sorry babe, I gotta run, our monkey’s escaped.”
Bwhahaha – this made me laugh out loud. great chapter and congratulations on the home front!
BK
We’re happy we succeeded to make at least someone laugh with this story haha. Loved your comment, thank you BK!
Ive read all 21 chapters in 2 days, I cried 5 times during it all. I am in awe of this story. It’s honestly so good. <3
Hello Dean,
We’re hoping it doesn’t sound too weird when we say we’re happy and sad at the same time that we made you sad. Not going to appologize though. ;)
Thank you for the uplifting comment!
Besides the rest I particularly loved how you wrote NC-17 scene! How you used jewelry to translate Bette’s layered feelings. This wasn’t sex just for purpose of putting sex in ff, but with a meaning to move story forward. Not to mention that it was hot, far from simplistic description, but truly well written. I don’t think I read similar NC-17 in any other ff.All the ‘ahhhs’, ‘ohhhhs’, ‘yesss’ etc. never bring much to the story for my feeling. Well done!
You are not thinking to finish this story soon, right?
Are you such a troublemaker as your nickname implies?
I’m happy someone noticed the jewelry part, but I don’t share your opinion on NC-17 scenes in other FF’s. There are many amazing writers around here!
Enjoy the next chapter Troublemaker!