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Uncharted Territory
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‘Did you put anything else on fire?’
She chuckles huskily. ‘Are we still talking about my day?’
Enthralling her further with my touch I slide my hand up her thigh. ‘Mmm no panties…’ I smile as she hauls in a breath and tenses. ‘Focus Mrs. Porter.’ I warn as she threatens to get lost in a surge of desire. Her eyes shut open at the reference that I didn’t use for longer than I can remember. Slowly untying her robe I keep her attention on me as a thousand expressions color her face. When it slides on the floor with a sigh I urge her to straddle me. ‘You have no idea how pleased I was to hear you’re using my name.’
Clutching a fistful of my hair she sends shivers down my spine as she presses her lips against mine. ‘How pleased?’ She pants as she breaks the long, liquid kiss and leans back in my lap with a sexy toss of her hair.
‘So very pleased…I couldn’t wait to have you all to myself tonight.’
‘I’m all yours.’ Dragging her tongue over my lips she underlines her promise, before she rises over me with her hands finding support on my shoulders, pushing my back into the back rest of the couch. ‘… not only tonight.’
‘Show me.’ I prepare my fingers to consume her. Probing me with her eyes, she bites her bottom lip. And nearly devastates my control when she slowly lowers herself onto me. Once I’m drenched in her sweet heat she arches her back to better accept me. ‘That’s right…let me fill you.’ I growl against the throbbing vein in her neck, deliberately stretching her.
Clenching her knees against my hips she starts to ride a languid, repetitive rhythm her full breasts sway close to my starved mouth. My teeth dig into the pebbled flesh drawing out a ragged moan. ‘Please… yes own me.’
With my fingers tightly locked inside of her there’s only so little I can do more, nevertheless I press my thumb against her and rub in small circles. This has always been our favorite position, it gives me a sense of control while I know she’s setting the pace. And I can look at her wild and reckless as I stir her primal needs. I craved for her to need me like this. ‘Fuck.. you’re so tight.’
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Welcome back and congratulations with your upcoming wedding! Did you found the perfect rings?
What a way to come back with this story! They are on the right path and they need to keep talking to each other, about their fears, their feelings, about everything what is troubling them, makes them happy. Show each other by little things how much they love each other.
I am very happy Bette didn’t feel threatened anymore by the woman she got to know by searching Google and Tina cheated on Bette with. Still it will sting and hurt sometimes but their is provement.
Thank you for this chapter!
Bibi! Thank you for the wishes and your comments through out the story. The perfect rings are still waiting to be found but it’s just a matter of time ;).
Many CONGRATS on this fab news!! Thanks for sharing!!
Now leave me be to partake of this chapter
Thank you DumplinT. Hope you enjoyed the chapter. :)
Congratulations! There is nothing better that building a life with the one you love and who loves you in return. May you know a lifetime of happiness.
May Bette and Tina continue to find their way back. It’s still rough for Bette but will hopefully continue to get better. That woman needs to stay away from Tina. Yes, Tina has told her it was a mistake but she needs to continue to be as direct as possible. Oh, and Mrs. Porter was a very nice touch.
Dear Billy. Thank you for your lovely words. And your comment, it means a lot.
Congratulations on your engagement! It was as lovely to hear as seeing this new chapter.
This story is giving me all the feels. I love that Bette doesn’t make herself so sick anymore over that other woman because she is getting more and more confident in her relationship with Tina. She called her Mrs Porter and baby… so lovely <3
Hey Cam!
When are you going to post a new story, we’re eagerly waiting. Tick tack, tick, tack. No pressure. ;)
Thank you for your encouragement!
“Honey, I won’t make it home for dinner we’re about to set Manhattan on fire; I had such an amazing day at work today, we finally killed the mother, it was beautiful; Sorry babe, I gotta run, our monkey’s escaped.”
Bwhahaha – this made me laugh out loud. great chapter and congratulations on the home front!
BK
We’re happy we succeeded to make at least someone laugh with this story haha. Loved your comment, thank you BK!
Ive read all 21 chapters in 2 days, I cried 5 times during it all. I am in awe of this story. It’s honestly so good. <3
Hello Dean,
We’re hoping it doesn’t sound too weird when we say we’re happy and sad at the same time that we made you sad. Not going to appologize though. ;)
Thank you for the uplifting comment!
Besides the rest I particularly loved how you wrote NC-17 scene! How you used jewelry to translate Bette’s layered feelings. This wasn’t sex just for purpose of putting sex in ff, but with a meaning to move story forward. Not to mention that it was hot, far from simplistic description, but truly well written. I don’t think I read similar NC-17 in any other ff.All the ‘ahhhs’, ‘ohhhhs’, ‘yesss’ etc. never bring much to the story for my feeling. Well done!
You are not thinking to finish this story soon, right?
Are you such a troublemaker as your nickname implies?
I’m happy someone noticed the jewelry part, but I don’t share your opinion on NC-17 scenes in other FF’s. There are many amazing writers around here!
Enjoy the next chapter Troublemaker!