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US.II *^Meet The Schecters^*
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-Tina-
The idea was to either scream my heart out, or just kick her out of my life for good. The fact that she again lied to me about Candace sets me off, I cant even think straight right now, I was planning on meeting Jennys parents and hopefully helping her out with their approval of Sly.
Some help I am now, im a mess from crying, but Ill just have to be a few minutes late, right now my marriage with Bette is more important to me now.
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Shane hid her triumphant smile as she and Carmen helped in the kitchen with Jenny. Carmen quickly stuffed a piece of pasta in her mouth without Jenny looking, Shane tickled her as she tried again, Jenny turned to them and placed her hands on them both, If you guys keep this up, no food for you both.
Shane scurried away from Carmen and began to work on dessert. They all heard a gruffing sound and small little feet run across the floor and into the small kitchen.
I wanna see I wanna see!
Shane jumped back in surprise as Chris starting hoping around her. She picked him and carried him into the bathroom, Dude as soon as youre clean, you can see.
Aw, thats bull-
Shane covered his mouth, and laughed, Try not to say that okay.
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Kit and Bette hung out until they where ready for the greeting of Jennys parents.
Wait, their Jew. Kit coughed out. Yeah, or Gipsy.
You cant really tell I guess. Bette flipped out her cell phone and ranged up Tina, apparently, she got one angry voice mail,
Sorry not in, right now im getting ready to strangle Bette as soon as she gets home, leave a message.
*Beep* Bette quickly hung up and walked a bit startled, Kit had overheard the voice mail and just walked in silence,
UhmCandace again.
Yeap.
Bette, my dear baby sis, your ***** is grass.
Bette nudged her, I cant keep doing this, im pretty sure Candace doesnt want anything else out of me, just to be friends.
Uh huh. Kit rolled her eyes, Sucker.
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Tina had decided to drop all the suspicions that Bette was out cheating, and focused on the cooking, she called Jenny up and said that she would be bringing some food over as well, she had hoped to make it if she wasnt so wrapped up in kicking Candaces *****.
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At first I liked the story, but as I read further I became offended by the lack of research you did on writing this. I’m not here to start an argument by any means, though. I just want to point out a few things. You had Jenny’s dad make a cross sign over his chest. That is something Catholic’s do and a Jew would never do that. This is how you spell: Barmitzvah. Mari isn’t orthodox. The only way a Jewish woman would be named Mary is if it was the Jewish version “Miriam.” And I did not understand any of the ‘yiddish’ words you wrote. Were you thinking of Meshuginuh? It means crazy. Your story plot was good, but the Jewish content was not accurate, but if you were to continue this story I would be happy to help you out with any info, as I myself am Jewish. And I just want to say to everyone that reads this that not all Orthodox families are that judgemental. My Aunt is orthodox and she has given me several connections into the lesbian community and even has many lesbian friends. Besides all that, you do have a nice comedic style of writing. Thank you.
damn im so so sorry Rainbow, and yes im planing on keeping them in my stories , and yes i would love for you to help me out with this, sorry that you where offended man
It’s just important that you make sure the information your writing about is correct, when you are writing about a certain group of people, you know? A lot of people who were in the consentration camps were raped, and I don’t think Jenny’s father (if in real life) would have said that he would rather be raped than be in the camps, because everything bad happened there, and I personally believe being raped cannot be compared to the torture in that tragic time because they are two seperate issues. I think both of her parents would be much more supportive and caring about both her lesbianism and her being raped. Anyways, if you want to include any Yiddish in your next story, I have a resource book you can try to find online…”The Joys of Yiddish” by Leo Rosten. Also if you’d like to use any Hebrew you can find words and English translations in the Hebrew-English dictionary by Ben Yehuda. If you have anymore questions about Jewish traditions and/or heritage please feel free to email me at gary_meow@sbcglobal.net
Just one more suggestion, if you need to look up any information on Judaism, why not do a search through Google or Yahoo? To make sure the sites are legit, just go to the sites that are sponsored by the search engines. Good Luck!