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US.II *^Meet The Schecters^*
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Tina had to shack her again to keep her awake, Just promise me you want fall face first into your plate. She giggled as Sly took her hand,
Arent you coming too?
Nah, Bette and I are going to have a serious talk.
OhOh! Sly backed away from her as she finished, I dont want to be around when she gets home then. Sly slurred again and nearly stumbled as she tried to walk, Tina caught her, and laid her back down.
Easy, you have enough time, and Shane said that she was going to go pick them up at the airport as soon as possible, so relax a little okay, more coffee?
Bette hid behind the wall leading to the kitchen, Sly was to busy keeping herself awake to pay her any mind. Tina walked back in and gave her the mug, Sly to her time with it this time.
Bette quietly too k off her shoes and listened in on what the two where talking about now, Im pretty sure that Ill make a bad impression, Jenny may not even be able to help me out on this one.
Nonsense, youll do great just try not to push yourself to hard okay.
Yeahso you and Bette, not good right now?
You can say that, Candace. Sly groaned
Not this chick again, Tina, dude, leave it alone, I say theirs nothing going on with them, Bette is that dumb okay.
Sly was becoming more and more roused as she sipped more of her coffee. If shes not, then why not say that she had Candaces cell number.
Probably because she knew youd act all demented and evil. She received a threatening look from Tina and held up her hands. Look you can be scary at times, but what girl wouldnt act like that, she probably thought it was nothing anyway Tina.
I supposeshes still getting no ***** for a month though. Tina snapped her fingers and tossed her head towards the wall where Bette was hiding, Come out Bette, I smelled you perfume before you hit the door.
Bette came out with her hands up; Sly placed the mug down and eased her way out of the house of pain.
Bette, be careful.
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At first I liked the story, but as I read further I became offended by the lack of research you did on writing this. I’m not here to start an argument by any means, though. I just want to point out a few things. You had Jenny’s dad make a cross sign over his chest. That is something Catholic’s do and a Jew would never do that. This is how you spell: Barmitzvah. Mari isn’t orthodox. The only way a Jewish woman would be named Mary is if it was the Jewish version “Miriam.” And I did not understand any of the ‘yiddish’ words you wrote. Were you thinking of Meshuginuh? It means crazy. Your story plot was good, but the Jewish content was not accurate, but if you were to continue this story I would be happy to help you out with any info, as I myself am Jewish. And I just want to say to everyone that reads this that not all Orthodox families are that judgemental. My Aunt is orthodox and she has given me several connections into the lesbian community and even has many lesbian friends. Besides all that, you do have a nice comedic style of writing. Thank you.
damn im so so sorry Rainbow, and yes im planing on keeping them in my stories , and yes i would love for you to help me out with this, sorry that you where offended man
It’s just important that you make sure the information your writing about is correct, when you are writing about a certain group of people, you know? A lot of people who were in the consentration camps were raped, and I don’t think Jenny’s father (if in real life) would have said that he would rather be raped than be in the camps, because everything bad happened there, and I personally believe being raped cannot be compared to the torture in that tragic time because they are two seperate issues. I think both of her parents would be much more supportive and caring about both her lesbianism and her being raped. Anyways, if you want to include any Yiddish in your next story, I have a resource book you can try to find online…”The Joys of Yiddish” by Leo Rosten. Also if you’d like to use any Hebrew you can find words and English translations in the Hebrew-English dictionary by Ben Yehuda. If you have anymore questions about Jewish traditions and/or heritage please feel free to email me at gary_meow@sbcglobal.net
Just one more suggestion, if you need to look up any information on Judaism, why not do a search through Google or Yahoo? To make sure the sites are legit, just go to the sites that are sponsored by the search engines. Good Luck!