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US.II *^Meet The Schecters^*
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Whyd you say that to JennyI know that know one would have not wanted either to happen to them.?
Sly, you have to look at things in life that are much easier than some, would you rather be tormented by *****, or just raped.
I dont know
And thats the hard part, Jenny was never the same after that, and who would be, I tried to hide her from it, Mari tried as well, but everywhere we went she was looked at like some alien, deformed alien.
Slys passion for the language of life grew even more from this old man, I tell you what Sly, this was one ***** of an evening, andI want to fully except you into the family.
He stood up, Give me a huge, He opened his arms and grinned the glasses on his face made him look even crazier than ever, Um okay.
They shared a huge and he kissed both the side of her cheeks, ‘Secotia’ now where did Shane and her friend go, to tell you the truth I thought Shane was actually a man.
Shane jumped out behind the tree, Hey! Im a girl remember that.
He laughed at Shane red face Carmen soon fell out of the bushes onto the ground laughing. Mari and Jenny came out side hearing all the laughing, Whats going on out here,
Mari tugged at her husbands ear, Are you fushukana again?
I was just telling a joke, boo boo. Mari wagered her finger in his face again, Dont you call me boo boo.
Sly crept by the couple an into Jennys arms, she whipped away the tear that where still on her face, I think he gave us his blessings.
Jenny smiled and wrapped her arms tightly around Sly. Shane poked the two.
Okay, Sly I would like to apologize, we had sort of made a bet on you. Carmen pulled out the money from her pocket and gave it to you, None of us had a thought that you would actually bond with her dad, so you win.
Sly jaw slacked, as Jenny rolled her eyes, Will just take this for rent.
Hey where are we going to sleep.? Mari yelled at them all. The four commodores looked at each other, Can you say hotel.
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At first I liked the story, but as I read further I became offended by the lack of research you did on writing this. I’m not here to start an argument by any means, though. I just want to point out a few things. You had Jenny’s dad make a cross sign over his chest. That is something Catholic’s do and a Jew would never do that. This is how you spell: Barmitzvah. Mari isn’t orthodox. The only way a Jewish woman would be named Mary is if it was the Jewish version “Miriam.” And I did not understand any of the ‘yiddish’ words you wrote. Were you thinking of Meshuginuh? It means crazy. Your story plot was good, but the Jewish content was not accurate, but if you were to continue this story I would be happy to help you out with any info, as I myself am Jewish. And I just want to say to everyone that reads this that not all Orthodox families are that judgemental. My Aunt is orthodox and she has given me several connections into the lesbian community and even has many lesbian friends. Besides all that, you do have a nice comedic style of writing. Thank you.
damn im so so sorry Rainbow, and yes im planing on keeping them in my stories , and yes i would love for you to help me out with this, sorry that you where offended man
It’s just important that you make sure the information your writing about is correct, when you are writing about a certain group of people, you know? A lot of people who were in the consentration camps were raped, and I don’t think Jenny’s father (if in real life) would have said that he would rather be raped than be in the camps, because everything bad happened there, and I personally believe being raped cannot be compared to the torture in that tragic time because they are two seperate issues. I think both of her parents would be much more supportive and caring about both her lesbianism and her being raped. Anyways, if you want to include any Yiddish in your next story, I have a resource book you can try to find online…”The Joys of Yiddish” by Leo Rosten. Also if you’d like to use any Hebrew you can find words and English translations in the Hebrew-English dictionary by Ben Yehuda. If you have anymore questions about Jewish traditions and/or heritage please feel free to email me at gary_meow@sbcglobal.net
Just one more suggestion, if you need to look up any information on Judaism, why not do a search through Google or Yahoo? To make sure the sites are legit, just go to the sites that are sponsored by the search engines. Good Luck!