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US.II *^Meet The Schecters^*
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Shane hides the small laugh that came forth, as did Sly. Jenny covered her face as her parents began to start a bit of trouble, Psst, why didnt you tell me your dad looked a lot like Mel Brooks.
She groaned and rose to get another drink, Carmen and Kit where agreeing on the bet terms. Jenny cursed under her breath, That bad.
Theyre arguing. Carmen and Kit laughed at the scene, Your mom looks like shes in charge.
Believe me shes always been. Jennys moods had wavered ever since they wanted to talk about her child hood, but never did.
She waited until things start to settle down and served the desert. Kit checked her watch an new it was about time to leave and meet up with Ivan.
She hugged Jenny as she awed, It was wonderful, I will see you all later. Shane waved at her and grabbed Carmens hand, Um will be right back.
Carmen was delusional at first and followed her out the door. Jenny and her mom, along with Sly cleaned the table and put away some of the dishes.
Sly felt the tensed mood between the two, as did Cren, he motioned Chris off to his room.
We have beenavoiding this catastrophe for far to long. Mari turned around, What do we have to say about it Cren. “If you mean the half he/she that’s standing by me right now, then no.” Sly smiled slightly
Jenny placed her hand on both sides of the sink. Mari, what do you think, im royally fucked up because of it.
Cren shook his head, You must remember Jenny its not your fault, none of us could foretell this.
Mari tried to change the subject, “Well i think your trying to have the best of both worlds Jenny, that’s not how i raised you.” Again Mari pointed an accusing finger at Sly, Cren pushed her back into the subject. “Mari not now, Jenny, this thing will eat you up inside like it did me if you don’t let it go.” But you acted like it never happened dadI was waiting for some explanation that you would pretend that everything was okay with me.
Mari had had enough, No more from you young lady, you lived thats a blessing, most women are not that fortunate.
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At first I liked the story, but as I read further I became offended by the lack of research you did on writing this. I’m not here to start an argument by any means, though. I just want to point out a few things. You had Jenny’s dad make a cross sign over his chest. That is something Catholic’s do and a Jew would never do that. This is how you spell: Barmitzvah. Mari isn’t orthodox. The only way a Jewish woman would be named Mary is if it was the Jewish version “Miriam.” And I did not understand any of the ‘yiddish’ words you wrote. Were you thinking of Meshuginuh? It means crazy. Your story plot was good, but the Jewish content was not accurate, but if you were to continue this story I would be happy to help you out with any info, as I myself am Jewish. And I just want to say to everyone that reads this that not all Orthodox families are that judgemental. My Aunt is orthodox and she has given me several connections into the lesbian community and even has many lesbian friends. Besides all that, you do have a nice comedic style of writing. Thank you.
damn im so so sorry Rainbow, and yes im planing on keeping them in my stories , and yes i would love for you to help me out with this, sorry that you where offended man
It’s just important that you make sure the information your writing about is correct, when you are writing about a certain group of people, you know? A lot of people who were in the consentration camps were raped, and I don’t think Jenny’s father (if in real life) would have said that he would rather be raped than be in the camps, because everything bad happened there, and I personally believe being raped cannot be compared to the torture in that tragic time because they are two seperate issues. I think both of her parents would be much more supportive and caring about both her lesbianism and her being raped. Anyways, if you want to include any Yiddish in your next story, I have a resource book you can try to find online…”The Joys of Yiddish” by Leo Rosten. Also if you’d like to use any Hebrew you can find words and English translations in the Hebrew-English dictionary by Ben Yehuda. If you have anymore questions about Jewish traditions and/or heritage please feel free to email me at gary_meow@sbcglobal.net
Just one more suggestion, if you need to look up any information on Judaism, why not do a search through Google or Yahoo? To make sure the sites are legit, just go to the sites that are sponsored by the search engines. Good Luck!