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Thats all she had to say on that matter, Sly was digressing that in her mind, she thought about the book that Jenny was just now finishing and the scene in front of her.
Comparing them both she got the whole picture in her mind. You where raped.
Cren turned quickly on his heels, and put his hands up, Try to refer that word in another term,
Sly ran a shaky hand threw her hair, How could you not telltell me that.
Jenny fumbled with her words, Itsveryhard for me, I was still unsure if it was real or just a dreamyou have to understand that.
Sly tried to speak but no words came forth, Cren settled the tensed conversation. Yes you where, attacked Jenny, but like you mom said you survived, do you know that Iwould have wanted to be in your place at that time, then have witness the death of my people, Jenny its hard I know, but your not marked like me, your very lucky, and the reason your mom tried to forget, was because I wanted her to.
Sly patted Cren on his back and led him to a chair, Mari had her daughter in her sight, Jenny, aria things arent that simple in life,
Jennys hands tightened on the counter as she broke down, her mother was right their to catch her, her father fiddled around in his pockets when Sly handed him a cigarette, Lets take this out side for a moment.
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Carmen brushed past Shane quietly and bit her lip, Youthink shell be okay Shane didnt respond as she hid behind some trees as the front door opened, Carmen quickly hopped in a bush.
The old man was tired looking as usual and smoked as he sat on the steps; Sly joined him a few seconds later.
It hurt doesnt it. He pointed to her wrists, How in the ***** did you get that.
Sly explained to horrid story, Hmm, at least yours is not in numbers, He rolled up his sleeve and showed her his tattoo, 666…they did it as a jokeand made sure Id never forget.
Did you escape or did you have to wait on someone to rescue you Sly didnt mean to push him to remember the repulsive memories. He craned his neck, I waited about 8 months, and on that last day I ran, I ran like it wasnt know tomorrow and for some there wasnt.
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At first I liked the story, but as I read further I became offended by the lack of research you did on writing this. I’m not here to start an argument by any means, though. I just want to point out a few things. You had Jenny’s dad make a cross sign over his chest. That is something Catholic’s do and a Jew would never do that. This is how you spell: Barmitzvah. Mari isn’t orthodox. The only way a Jewish woman would be named Mary is if it was the Jewish version “Miriam.” And I did not understand any of the ‘yiddish’ words you wrote. Were you thinking of Meshuginuh? It means crazy. Your story plot was good, but the Jewish content was not accurate, but if you were to continue this story I would be happy to help you out with any info, as I myself am Jewish. And I just want to say to everyone that reads this that not all Orthodox families are that judgemental. My Aunt is orthodox and she has given me several connections into the lesbian community and even has many lesbian friends. Besides all that, you do have a nice comedic style of writing. Thank you.
damn im so so sorry Rainbow, and yes im planing on keeping them in my stories , and yes i would love for you to help me out with this, sorry that you where offended man
It’s just important that you make sure the information your writing about is correct, when you are writing about a certain group of people, you know? A lot of people who were in the consentration camps were raped, and I don’t think Jenny’s father (if in real life) would have said that he would rather be raped than be in the camps, because everything bad happened there, and I personally believe being raped cannot be compared to the torture in that tragic time because they are two seperate issues. I think both of her parents would be much more supportive and caring about both her lesbianism and her being raped. Anyways, if you want to include any Yiddish in your next story, I have a resource book you can try to find online…”The Joys of Yiddish” by Leo Rosten. Also if you’d like to use any Hebrew you can find words and English translations in the Hebrew-English dictionary by Ben Yehuda. If you have anymore questions about Jewish traditions and/or heritage please feel free to email me at gary_meow@sbcglobal.net
Just one more suggestion, if you need to look up any information on Judaism, why not do a search through Google or Yahoo? To make sure the sites are legit, just go to the sites that are sponsored by the search engines. Good Luck!