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    Vignettes: Chapter 27

    Story written on April 25, 2005 by fareast.
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    Number of Comments: 37
    Words: 2059
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53467
    Author Notes:

    No answers, plenty of questions

    Ok, what then?

    If you want to read it, you can. Bette took Tinas hand and placed the envelope in it, folding her hand over Tinas. She smiled faintly.

    Are you sure? Tina asked, unsure of Bettes motive.

    Im sure. Hopefully youre sure you want to read it. Bette challenged. Just keep in mind it was written a long time ago.

    Thanks. Tina forced a smile and she walked out the door. Dana moved to follow her, but Alice grabbed hold of her and glared at her.

    Before anybody could say something to break the awkward silence, Shane sat up and rubbed her eyes, smearing dirt all over her face even more. Good morning everyone.

    Hi Shane. Bette smiled and messed her hair up. Youre a mess!

    Look whos talking. Shane laughed.

    Both of you are filthy and look at the dirt all over my living room. Alice said.

    Sorry, mom. Well clean it up. Bette replied, giggling at Shane.

    I noticed we didnt have an itinerary ready for us this morning. Does that mean we get a free day? Dana asked Shane.

    No… Ill think of something so dont go far. Actually, we can figure out what were going to do today now. Wheres Tina?

    Everyone looked at each other but nobody said anything.

    What? Shane asked. Whats going on?

    She found the envelope this morning. Bette said.

    Did she read anything?

    No, I woke up just as she grabbed it.

    Wow, close call huh?

    Shane, I let her take it. She just left.

    Shanes jaw dropped. Holy *****.

    Whats the big deal? I wrote that years ago. It doesnt change anything.

    Shane shrugged. Its your call.

    Tina tucked the envelope in her pants and started a steady pace for her morning run, a little quicker than her normal speed. She was afraid someone would try to follow her and all she wanted for the morning was to be alone. As she ran, she focused on keeping her breathing stead and strong until she reached the overlook above part of the city. When she arrived at the top, she found a grassy spot and sat down, taking off her shoes and socks, letting the breeze cool her body. The envelope was damp with sweat and she studied it closely, deciding to open it. Smelling it, she noticed it had a musty scent, as if it had been hiding away somewhere dark for a long time. Inside, she found two letters. The first she recognized as the first letter she ever wrote Bette. She grinned and felt her heart warm at the memory of her discovery of love for Bette so many years ago. Putting the first letter aside, she saw the other one made out to her. Taking a deep breath, she started to read.

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    4. My heart continues to break for these two women, chapter and chapter. They so clearly still love each other, surely you can find a way to bring them back together.

    5. No offense to the other writers, but it boggles my mind that this story did not win an award. I am at a loss as to why it didn’t win. This story is the bomb in my book.

    9. i seriously do not even know what to begin to say. i think that this story is just so well written and so well told. you have a great ability of taking us wherever you wish, be it at the beach in Provincetown or the living room of Alice’s house. absolutely amazing and for that- i sincerely thank you!

    13. Hmm…don’t quite have a read on Tina at this moment, so I’m looking forward to her and Bette in the next installment. Bette kind of took the coward’s way out with the letter, and the “it was written a long time ago” line.

    22. I am truly in awe of this story fareast…..You are one hell of a storyteller…i have no idea where you are planning on taking us, but i can feel the love B & T still obviously have for each other……..you give us a taste every chapter (and a bit of hope) and leave us hanging out for more every single time…..I love it!!!!…….Next one soon i hope??……Thank you:)

    23. I’ve been a big fan of yours for a while now your storytelling ability is great. This is what I’ve been waiting for and getting here has been a well paced wonderful journey. Thanks for sharing this and please don’t keep us waiting too long!

    24. I have just read all 27 chapters and it’s 1.45am!! this is such a beautiful story, it has kept me enthralled. The emotions is so intense and it keeps building. I can hope that Tina and Bette will somehow find each other again.

    27. You are such an incredible writer. I think the only reason you didn’t win an award this time was because the story has not yet developed far enough. I get so happy every time that I see you post. You will definitely win next time. Thanks for writing this beautiful story, can’t wait for the next installment.

    28. Before I read this I want to say one thing:
      You should have received a Fanfic Award.
      I’m sorry you didn’t. But please know that this fic and your previous one were both worthy of an honor.
      Thank you!

    34. Wow! My palms are all sweaty…nervous…hoping they’ll be honest with their feelings for one another. I absolutely LOVE this story! You are a wonderfully talented writer.

    36. I was about to turn off my computer when I saw another installment of this story. I am so glad I read this b4 going 2 bed… this story is AWESOME. Please post another 5-star chapter soon…

    37. Awesome chapter – I want them to have a conversation so badly. Have that long overdue fight – do something but please be honest about how they feel. Please hurry back!

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