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Vignettes: Chapter 27
Alice made a pot of coffee and brought out mugs to all the woman in the living room.
Ok, now Id like to know what the ***** all this stuff is in this box and why both of you are all dirty. Alice said.
Shane and Bette looked at each other, wondering who would be the first to speak. They both opened their mouths and talked at the same time. Stopping, they laughed. Finally Bette beat Shane to it. We went to Tina and my old house.
In the middle of the night? Dana asked.
Bette nodded. Yes, we sat up late talking and catching up when I wanted to dig up this box. I buried it before I moved out and put a bunch of stuff in it.
And the envelope you gave to Tina? Alice raised an eyebrow.
There were two letters in it. One was the first love letter I ever received from Tina before she even could explain what she was feeling for me. The next is a letter I wrote to Tina the night before I moved to New York.
Im assuming its personal? Dana asked.
More than personal. Shane chipped in. More like gut wrenchingly honest and bold. If it broke my heart, then I cant imagine what Tinas feeling right now.
Youre a brave woman, Bette. Alice commented. So when do I get to read it?
Bette rolled her eyes. Its no big deal.
Whatever. Alice said. So whats up with the Dr. Seuss box?
Its something I bought for the baby Tina and I lost. I decided to put it to good use.
What is all this stuff, anyway? Dana asked.
See for yourself. Bette said.
Dana, Alice and Shane rummaged around finding old pictures of the gang and several personal ones of Bette and Tina. Bettes wedding ring was found along with a used candle. A VHS tape was pulled out and an empty wine bottle. A scrap of fabric slipped through Shanes fingers and a page of a book that was ripped out fell out. Dana found an invitation made out to Bette and Tina for the Provocations show from so long ago. Soon, the box was emptied and some things made sense to the woman because they recognized the items, but others, they knew must have been personal belongings between Bette and Tina. Curiosity overwhelmed them.
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(76 votes, average: 3.80 out of 5)
I love it but it’s so hard to wait so long for the next chapter. Post soon pwease.
This is soooo goooood. Please post again soon.
Sound Like the old Tina ,when she wanted Bette or was angry with her for something Bette had done. LOVE IT.
My heart continues to break for these two women, chapter and chapter. They so clearly still love each other, surely you can find a way to bring them back together.
No offense to the other writers, but it boggles my mind that this story did not win an award. I am at a loss as to why it didn’t win. This story is the bomb in my book.
Ooooo, get your ass movin’ Bette, Tina means business. Great update.
Awww..sooo good!!
Please post again soon..l know it adds to the tension & what-not..but screw it..We need more!!! He! x
as always it’s perfect :)
i seriously do not even know what to begin to say. i think that this story is just so well written and so well told. you have a great ability of taking us wherever you wish, be it at the beach in Provincetown or the living room of Alice’s house. absolutely amazing and for that- i sincerely thank you!
So, so good. I know I am repeating others but it is true.
Wow ! I love this story. Even though it’s heartbreaking at times. Thanx.
I’m with Kathy here..award winning stuff and getting better all the time..keep it coming. Love it.
Hmm…don’t quite have a read on Tina at this moment, so I’m looking forward to her and Bette in the next installment. Bette kind of took the coward’s way out with the letter, and the “it was written a long time ago” line.
OMG…you can’t possibly leave us like this….damn it you did leave us hanging :-)
I agree with Kathy….I love this story.
Wow! This is a great story and I cannot wait for the next post. Wonderful!
this story just keeps getting better and better — wonderful chapter — thanks
ok, you have a beautiful story going here, I think you can bring it to a very beautiful beginning for these two women, please post soon Thanks
NEXT CHAPTER plzzzzzzz……
I love it this so hard on them please post soon..They still love each othr let them find out..
Another excellent story please bring them back together where they belong
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I am truly in awe of this story fareast…..You are one hell of a storyteller…i have no idea where you are planning on taking us, but i can feel the love B & T still obviously have for each other……..you give us a taste every chapter (and a bit of hope) and leave us hanging out for more every single time…..I love it!!!!…….Next one soon i hope??……Thank you:)
I’ve been a big fan of yours for a while now your storytelling ability is great. This is what I’ve been waiting for and getting here has been a well paced wonderful journey. Thanks for sharing this and please don’t keep us waiting too long!
I have just read all 27 chapters and it’s 1.45am!! this is such a beautiful story, it has kept me enthralled. The emotions is so intense and it keeps building. I can hope that Tina and Bette will somehow find each other again.
Thanks for another incredible chapter. Please don’t leave us hanging too long. Love this story!!
oh man, i hope they can clear the air and be able to go thru the box together. great update, i can definately feel the tension between them.
You are such an incredible writer. I think the only reason you didn’t win an award this time was because the story has not yet developed far enough. I get so happy every time that I see you post. You will definitely win next time. Thanks for writing this beautiful story, can’t wait for the next installment.
Before I read this I want to say one thing:
You should have received a Fanfic Award.
I’m sorry you didn’t. But please know that this fic and your previous one were both worthy of an honor.
Thank you!
This chapter was so good, looking forward to next post.
Thank you.
Wow – you out do yourself each time. I’m with Kathy – you deserved to win. Amazing as always. Thanks!
Great as usual – waiting for your next post- patiently- sort of.
WOW Fucking outstanding.
Yes go Tina talk to Bette PLEEEAASSSSE Thanks you are such a great storyteller I am totally sucked in. I can see the mud and dirt everywhere
Wow! My palms are all sweaty…nervous…hoping they’ll be honest with their feelings for one another. I absolutely LOVE this story! You are a wonderfully talented writer.
I am so happy that you are back fareast.
Very nice update. Tina is sure pissed of. I think it is time they talked and moved forward. Post soon
I was about to turn off my computer when I saw another installment of this story. I am so glad I read this b4 going 2 bed… this story is AWESOME. Please post another 5-star chapter soon…
Awesome chapter – I want them to have a conversation so badly. Have that long overdue fight – do something but please be honest about how they feel. Please hurry back!