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    Vignettes: Chapter 27

    Story written on April 25, 2005 by fareast.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53467
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    No answers, plenty of questions

    Ok, I recognize these pictures. Shane laughed at the photos of everyone over the years at parties and casual moments.

    And heres the unity candle from your commitment ceremony. Alice said.

    Look, this is a picture of your baby during the sonogram. Dana frowned and looked at the dark image.

    Whats on the tape? Alice asked.

    Bette laughed.

    Please dont tell me its a home ***** video. Alice groaned.

    No… maybe Ill let you watch it. Bette said.

    Shane held up the Provocations invitation and grimaced. Why would you keep this?

    To be reminded of why things are the way they are today.

    Bette, a lot of things led up to that night. Dont keep blaming yourself. Dana said.

    Bette shrugged. Those other things you wont recognize and trying to explain all the stories behind them will take all week.

    How many times do I have to tell you… we actually do have all week. Shane laughed.

    Tina tucked the note back into the envelope and closed her eyes, trying to clear her mind of all the thoughts that filled it. She also tried to clear her heart of all the mixed emotions that loitered there. She knew that reading that letter from Bette shouldnt bring up such strong feelings from her because of all the years that have passed and because they both have separate lives now, but she couldnt help what she felt. She wondered how she could go back to Alices and look Bette in the eyes. Would she be able to see inside of Tina like she used to? Or would none of it even matter?

    She let out a frustrated yell, thankful nobody was around. She threw a rock over the edge of the cliff and sighed. Why didnt Bette give her that note before she left? Why keep it to herself? She remembered how many times Bette tried to convince her of her love and commitment to her despite all the mistakes she had made. Tina had pushed Bette away time and time again because of her insecurities and fears. She didnt think she had the strength to be hurt like that again. And now as she sat in LA again, she wondered what couldve hurt more: keeping Bette out of her life permanently or taking the risk with loving Bette again.

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    4. My heart continues to break for these two women, chapter and chapter. They so clearly still love each other, surely you can find a way to bring them back together.

    5. No offense to the other writers, but it boggles my mind that this story did not win an award. I am at a loss as to why it didn’t win. This story is the bomb in my book.

    9. i seriously do not even know what to begin to say. i think that this story is just so well written and so well told. you have a great ability of taking us wherever you wish, be it at the beach in Provincetown or the living room of Alice’s house. absolutely amazing and for that- i sincerely thank you!

    13. Hmm…don’t quite have a read on Tina at this moment, so I’m looking forward to her and Bette in the next installment. Bette kind of took the coward’s way out with the letter, and the “it was written a long time ago” line.

    22. I am truly in awe of this story fareast…..You are one hell of a storyteller…i have no idea where you are planning on taking us, but i can feel the love B & T still obviously have for each other……..you give us a taste every chapter (and a bit of hope) and leave us hanging out for more every single time…..I love it!!!!…….Next one soon i hope??……Thank you:)

    23. I’ve been a big fan of yours for a while now your storytelling ability is great. This is what I’ve been waiting for and getting here has been a well paced wonderful journey. Thanks for sharing this and please don’t keep us waiting too long!

    24. I have just read all 27 chapters and it’s 1.45am!! this is such a beautiful story, it has kept me enthralled. The emotions is so intense and it keeps building. I can hope that Tina and Bette will somehow find each other again.

    27. You are such an incredible writer. I think the only reason you didn’t win an award this time was because the story has not yet developed far enough. I get so happy every time that I see you post. You will definitely win next time. Thanks for writing this beautiful story, can’t wait for the next installment.

    28. Before I read this I want to say one thing:
      You should have received a Fanfic Award.
      I’m sorry you didn’t. But please know that this fic and your previous one were both worthy of an honor.
      Thank you!

    34. Wow! My palms are all sweaty…nervous…hoping they’ll be honest with their feelings for one another. I absolutely LOVE this story! You are a wonderfully talented writer.

    36. I was about to turn off my computer when I saw another installment of this story. I am so glad I read this b4 going 2 bed… this story is AWESOME. Please post another 5-star chapter soon…

    37. Awesome chapter – I want them to have a conversation so badly. Have that long overdue fight – do something but please be honest about how they feel. Please hurry back!

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