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Vulnerability
Frowning, Bette stepped even closer, her hips grinding forward. “Fine. But give me another kiss. My body is on fire for you. At least I can walk away with the taste of you in my mouth.”
“That’s what you said this morning…”
“Kiss me, Tee…”
It was a kiss that lingered and soared, Bette taking the opportunity to feel her wife up, her hand closing on Tina’s breast possessively, knowingly, hungrily. Arching her back, Tina laughed, her hands cupping Bette’s cheeks.
“Go. You will forever distract me if you stay…”
“I will forever love you, Tee…”
“I love you too. Go…go…”
And so it was that on the first historic day of the King’s campaign, the naval commander in charge of the Royal Fleet, the notorious Captain Porter, walked the deck of Black Beauty with a tiny baby in her arms. Alert, Ella cooed and babbled loudly as Bette talked to her, pointing to clouds and birds and ropes here and there, interrupted only by the kisses she placed on the sweet head and rosy cheeks.
Gone were her worries that her crew would see her as “soft” if she showed her immense affection for her children. If anything, it endeared her to them more. Tipping their hats as she walked by, nudging each other to watch as their fearless leader spoke gently to the baby, pointing to seagulls then dolphins, telling Ella in great detail how she thought it might rain by the way the clouds were forming, the waves cresting higher, the smell in the air, the color of the sky.
“Hiya, Cap’tn…Miss Ella…” her crew said as she passed, Ella kicking her feet as she listened to her mother tell her all about the many exploits of Mad Maude, or Jumpy Joe or Shoeless Jack. Old Blue showed Ella the fish he and her brothers caught that morning, and she sucked her thumb in approval, her other hand finding Bette’s curls to hang onto, a sign Bette recognized as Ella getting tired.
Ella charmed everyone, her mother most of all. Toothless smiles radiated from her and her new vocal skills held everyone’s rapt attention as if she was delivering secret battle plans. She clearly loved her Mama B, biting the brunette’s chin, pulling her curls, nuzzling Bette’s neck. The entire ship was captivated, vying like fools for her attention.
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OneStorm1 says
I am so glad to see a new chapter of this wonderful tale. I am only midway through but had to stop and comment that I think most if not all of us are still riding the waves with our valiant captain. I will comment further when I finish the chapter.
BK says
YAY! Nice to hear you are still riding the waves… looking forward to your thoughts….
BK
OneStorm1 says
Ah, the plot thickens. It seems that the rascal has not only signed his own death warrant but the boy king also. Bette will not sit still while he harms anyone she loves. Bette may not know the whole story, but I feel like someone who is now loyal to her in the king’s fleet will not take lightly the treachery that is afoot.
BK says
The plot thickens… truer words were never spoken… thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!
Bibi28 says
Hey BK,
What a lovely surprise to see a new update!
Hope you are doing well and enjoyed your vacation.
I am not sure when i have the time to read it, i am already way behind with reading all the updates from the last two weeks. Maybe this weekend but certainly somewhere next week or weekend.
Take care my friend!
BK says
BiBi – so nice to hear from you my friend! I feel like we are so incredibly busy right now – I can’t believe it is mid September already! Hope you were able to get some time off to unplug and rest. Now that the weather is getting cooler might be time for a long weekend away… take care!
BK
Bibi28 says
Hey BK,
Time is flying away from me. I have a lot going on in my life at the moment and a lot of worry about a few friends battling with illness and my father who has another surgery next Tuesday, and still busy work days, I certainly can use a long weekend away to relax. But i have to settle with reading FF and that always relax me and gives me the opportunity to escape the real world for a moment.
And what a pleasure to read your story, i am still on board at the Captain’s ship!
But you always leave me worrying about Captain Bette, Healer Tina and their children. If i could i would jump on the Ship to help and protect them from the traitor and the stupid childless King Boy. But sadly i have to be there in spirit with them.
Please promise me you keep them safe and healthy, no more capturing, being held prison or wounded. And with the help of the Poisoner and The Healer the Captain will win this battle.
Take care my friend and I hope you are able to have a long weekend away!
DumplinT says
Totally believing for recovery of your Pops and your friends battling sickness. Take as much time as you need, and let otherloved one’s care for U.
Agree with U most heartedly about “NO more being captured, held prisoner or wounded!! It’s time for our Captain, Healer, and faithful crew to kick butt!!!
Cathy says
Still reading, love your stories. Can’t wait to read what Carmen and Tina have planned.
BK says
Thank you for letting me know, Cathy! Glad you have enjoyed this story!
SassyGran says
How I love to sail the Seas with these wonderful characters!
Thanks for a wonderful Chapter, already wanting more but I will be patient.
SG
BK says
thank you SG, hope all is well!
SassyGran says
Getting there thank you, hope things are okay with you.
SG
BK says
So glad to hear you are getting there! all well here just busy :)
Dr. A says
Thank you for updating this wonderful story! Actually, my current favorite by my favorite author. I have missed it!!! I love your writing, BK. When I read your stories, it is like watching a movie in my mind, such excellent descriptive writing. Trust that I will eagerly follow wherever you go, as long as our beloved Tibette remains safe. You had me worried a little bit with the crows nest incident. Golly, our poor heroine needs to heal yet again. As a doctor, I was empathizing with Tina about patient compliance. Even so, she shouldn’t feel that her healing efforts were incomplete. After all, x-rays are still many years away(1895)! As well as other diagnostic means. Her knowledge is admirable. Too bad, ice wasn’t readily available. Thank goodness that Bette has her equally heroic “bestie” Shane by her side! Please keep her safe too! Can hardly wait for the next chapter! Great work, my friend. Now, I’m off in search of another BK story to dive into, or reread. Happy writing! Dr A
BK says
Dr. A! Yes, poor Bette has taken a beating in this story – I needed her to be a little off her mark so others can think there is a crack in her defenses… hahah we all know how that will turn out!
Funny you mention the time line for x-rays… I actually tried to google when ice was used as a remedy and it seems there is still some time to go before doctors stopped trying to sweat out their patients and used ice to decrease swelling. And like you said, Bette isn’t the most compliant of patients, even if this go around she is promising to try and do better!
Thanks for commenting… always appreciate your insight and enouragement!
bk
DumplinT says
DrA,
Gosh I admire your literary skills in this comment. Folks like U speak our truth so well. HeHeHe!!!
Westy20 says
Made my day to se this new chapter posted!
I almost posted comments after reading the first page I was so moved. BK, such beautiful writing.
I was holding my breath after Bette slipped on the rope. For sure Tina would blame herself for Bette not completely being healed. As always I love how you write Bette & Tina. I love their flirty banter – “Don’t use that sexy voice with me” ….”So bossy. It turns me on”
And my favorite line – “Long enough for Bette to feel held, treasured and for Tina to marinate in the strength and tenderness of her Captain”
Can’t wait to see what comes next – does the King reach Bette’s mother first? what of the Rascal? And the poisoner and the healer – will they become the heroes of this great story?
I love this story! Thanks BK for another great chapter.
BK says
Westywest – so nice to hear from you! Glad you enjoyed this chapter. There are some lingering questions and tbh I don’t plan these stories… I just start writing – and deleting – and revising and then writing again. It’s a tedious process lol. You bring up good points – who reaches Bette’s mom first? Who will be the heros and what is the endgame for the rascal… lots to ponder fo sho…
Thanks for always commenting and encouraging have a great weekend!
C says
I’m ready for the healer and the poisoner. Can’t wait to see what they bring and do. I’m glad you’re still adding to this story, it’s a wonderful one.
BK says
Thank you so much C! Nice to have other members of the crew step up and add their talents to saving the situation. It will get more exciting the closer they get to port and Gigi! buckle your seatbelt!
DumplinT says
C,
It IZ time for some poison nectar for sure!!
DumplinT says
WhooHoo our meal of filet minion has arrived!! Will savor for a cpl or three readings, then will comment
BK says
whoop whoop
Filet minion hon-ney, lets go!
Merlion says
AHOY!!! Thanks BK!! Yay!! finally a new chapter!!
Oh wow!! Wake up call for Bette!! Not only because of the fall, but also to witness that she’s surrounded by reliable people so she should learn to trust others, especially sweet Tina! Sigh…. So looking forward to know what will happen to the boy king and his armada!
I really enjoy reading your story BK, feels like each word is blending and melting and flowing smoothly although the plot thickens!!
Stay safe and do update us, BK! ^^,
(imagine that I was swinging from the rope ladder when saying that)
BK says
haha! I love when you comment, Merlion! Def a wake up call for our dear sweet Captain who is used to handling business all one her own. You are so right – she should learn to trust others! Thank you for the kind words and stay safe yourself… buckle up for the next chapter…. the battle begins!
No swinging for rope ladders though… :))
Carol R says
Enjoying the story of Black Beauty. Really would like to read the final chapters of this story. Will you be adding new chapters soon. Thank you Carol
TeaAndDenial says
I’ve just found this story and I am so addicted! Your writing is so good <3
I will slowly work my way through all your fics now :)
BK says
Thank you! Glad you like it. Looking forward to reading your thoughts as you work your way through!
Carol R says
Loving the story but really would like to find out if Bette finds her mother. What happens with twerp King Little Boy. Please, please finish the story. Thank you.
BK says
Hi Carol – working on the new chapter now!
DumplinT says
BK
Thinking ’bout U. On this Valentines Day. Seems to me you were facing health issues with your Pops ad a dear friend?
R U all doing better now???