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Wanna Date? Chapter 20 (Conclusion)
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“So please, you can just forget about me Helena. Bette is my wife, and we are a family.” She looked Helena straight in the eye, trying to make it as clear as possible. “I’m sorry to have to be so blunt, but I never want to see you again.”
Bette wasn’t sure what made her happiest. Tina calling her her wife or her statement about never wanting to see Helena ever again. She couldn’t resist a smug grin in Helena’s direction.
“Yeah, so step off *****,” she taunted. Always a good line to use when dumping an appalling ex.
Tina gave her another glare, although Bette could see a little gleam of amusement in her eye too. Tina turned back to the now sullen looking English woman.
“I wish you well Helena, but please leave me alone. I mean it. Now, we have a doctor’s appointment.” And with that, Tina grabbed Bette’s hand firmly, dragging her off towards the entrance to the clinic.
Helena Peabody knew when to quit. She stared at the two of them for a moment, before throwing herself into the car angrily. If she wanted to, she could make things very difficult for Bette Porter and Tina Kennard.
She smiled nastily. Now there was a thought to cheer her up. She reached for her cell phone and punched in a number.
“Franklin, it’s Helena Peabody. I need to talk to you about extending Leo Herrera’s contract”
As they were about to enter the natal care unit, Bette stopped and pulled Tina around to face her. They hadn’t spoken in the few minutes it had taken them to reach the entrance, both of them processing the events that had just taken place.
“Tina, I’m sorry I lost my temper,” Bette said quietly, not meeting her eyes. “I can’t believe I pushed her like that, but I just could bear to see her hands on you again,” she admitted.
Tina grasped her chin, forcing her to meet her gaze.
“Bette, I love you and I want to be with you,” she said seriously. “Only you. Do you believe that?”
Bette regarded her love tenderly. “Yes,” she said carefully. “She just takes great joy in tormenting me. I’m sorry I reacted.”
“I know babe. You’ve been amazingly controlled lately. But let’s not talk about her any more ok? We have another woman in our lives right now. Two in fact, maybe three.”
Bette looked puzzled.
“We get to see our little girl again in a few minutes,” she reminded her. “Plus we need Dr Wilson’s approval for the home birth. Then we have to go talk nicely to Davina to see if she can get that monster of a birthing tank set up.”
They were smiling at each other again, something that had been happening a lot today, and Bette felt all the tension of the altercation with Helena leave her. This was going to be a good day. The first of many that stretched out in front of them.
“You’re absolutely right Tina, as always,” she agreed, leaning forwards to place a soft kiss on Tina’s lips. “Come on, let’s go see our daughter.”
The End
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Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Nicely written, I hope you write soon.
first and second luvs..lol..ok no no no “the end” the right is TBC ok?..i love it this is what we all wanna see on the show..i hope you continue great chapter thanks
Thank you so much for a job so well done. If you should decide not to do any more fanfic, know that you have contributed a wonderful work to this site.
Thank you!
Excellent job cogent. Please write again though, you’ll be missed. You did a great job of filling in gaps left by the show. This has definitely been one of my favourite stories. Thanks for writing.
I loved this whole story. Are we looking at another part??? Excellent. I wish sum1 would just kill off Helena or have her leave and never come back, or get her ass beat so bad she knows not to fuck with them any more.
dont know whether to laugh or cry. this was so good. it gave me what was missing from the show. please write something again soon.
I wonder from reading the last part if they had gotten back together in the beginning and then went to the hospital would the episode feel different.Great job.I hope you pop up soon with another story.
You’ve filled in the gaps beautifully! I absolutely loved this story and hope really hope that you write another story to showcase your talent. Thanks!!!
You did a wonderful job on this story. Just know we will be wait on another one from you if you decide to write more. THANKS
Thank you for a wonderful ending. The way it should have been. Much more emotional and loving than IC version. You are a amazing writer and I hope we get to see more stories soon.
Thank you Cogent53, for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed it immensly and look forward to whatever other stories you might contribute in the future.
EXCEL-fucking-LENT! Stories should have happy endings always. Real life has too much drama and misery as it is. You made my day.
I hope you write some more.
I did not always comment but wanted to thank you for the great story and hope you write more soon.
that was great hope you post soon…i just crack up everytime i hear the “step off bitch” line
What a good and excellent ending story and can’t wait to see you post soon. Please keep continue with the story, thank you!
WOO HOO! that was so Beautiful Amazing Writing and Dialog WHOA! Tina she is really Great to tell Helena about yeah So STEP OFF BITCH LOL! I Love it WOW! I’m trying to go to sleep but I see you posted again Thanks Please post soon.
great story – thanks for filling in the gaps!
WOW! I just see the last THE END SNIFF SNIFF OMG! PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE.
cogent, I absolutely loved your version of the last few episodes of Season 2. Your writing style is splendid and refreshing. Thank you sooo much for sharing your talents with us. I’m incredibly happy that you decided to post this story. I truly hope you return to us with a new one soon!
Great story! please write more!! :)
EXCELLENT Story.. either continue or please write another I like your style. Thanks for taking the time.
Thankyou for you excellent story youve filled in so many blanks that were left out in the series… looking forward to more from you whenever thanks
Great story….thanks for filling in the gaps!!Please write another
thank you for that wonderful story and ending…please post the new one soon!!! we’ll all be waiting. please make it a happy story!
Brilliant, just brilliant!!
K
Wonderful story, sad it’s over. Hope you write more soon.
Great story! I have enjoyed reading it and I think you did a fabulous job of giving us some dialogues that was needed that was not in the show.
thanks- i certainly enjoyed reading this! hope to see another from you soon.
Just letting you know how much I have enjoyed this, I’m sorry that this was the last chapter and do hope that you will do another story. You are a good writer.
Thank you for a wonderful story. It filled in a lot of gaps left last season and it was wonderful to read. I hope you continue to write FanFic stories…I look forwards to them. Again, thank you.