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Wanna Date? Chapter 20 (Conclusion)
“What James knows, is that he wants to keep his job, he seemed to have relatively few qualms about it.” Helena said in her usual smarmy way. She turned away from Bette, ignoring her as she stepped closer to Tina. “So, we’re having lunch at the Terraza, she’s really looking forward to meeting you, what time does this tour finish?” she said, trying to railroad her into agreeing.
“I’m not having lunch with you, and I don’t like this,” Tina said firmly. “I’ve told you and told you that it’s over. Why can’t you leave me alone?” She was really pissed off now. Tina was definitely the reasonable type, but she was reaching her limit.
“Tina, I don’t want to give up on us,” Helena said desperately, reaching out to grab her hands. “What we have is so good.”
Tina pulled her hands back as Bette’s patience finally snapped. She moved swiftly in front of Tina, shoving the English woman backwards. Bette wasn’t a physically violent woman, but her fist was clenched tightly, ready to launch a right cross if Helena laid a finger on Tina again.
“Are you deaf?” She said loudly, “Tina told you to leave her alone.” She felt Tina’s hand on her shoulder, trying to calm her down.
“Bette” she murmured. Bette half turned to face her, keeping one eye on Helena.
“I’m sorry Tina, but I just can’t stand here and watch while she tries to manhandle you.” She said.
“Manhandle?” Helena said, outraged. “You just shoved me! I could have you arrested!”
Tina could tell from Bette’s face that things were about to escalate even further if she didn’t do something.
“Alright, that’s enough,” she said pulling Bette away as she advanced menacingly towards the cowering and increasingly worried looking Helena. Bette was positively furious.
“Helena, Bette and I are back together again, in every sense of the word. I’m moving back home and we are having our baby together. Please just stop this.” She sighed at the situation. “I am starting to regret the day I ever met you,” she stated sadly.
“You and me both,” Bette muttered at Tina’s words. Tina gave her a sharp glare. She wasn’t helping.
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Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Yay!! Im first!! it was a really good story and im sad that ur ending it i cant wait to see wat u do next it should be really good!!!
Nicely written, I hope you write soon.
first and second luvs..lol..ok no no no “the end” the right is TBC ok?..i love it this is what we all wanna see on the show..i hope you continue great chapter thanks
Thank you so much for a job so well done. If you should decide not to do any more fanfic, know that you have contributed a wonderful work to this site.
Thank you!
Excellent job cogent. Please write again though, you’ll be missed. You did a great job of filling in gaps left by the show. This has definitely been one of my favourite stories. Thanks for writing.
I loved this whole story. Are we looking at another part??? Excellent. I wish sum1 would just kill off Helena or have her leave and never come back, or get her ass beat so bad she knows not to fuck with them any more.
dont know whether to laugh or cry. this was so good. it gave me what was missing from the show. please write something again soon.
I wonder from reading the last part if they had gotten back together in the beginning and then went to the hospital would the episode feel different.Great job.I hope you pop up soon with another story.
You’ve filled in the gaps beautifully! I absolutely loved this story and hope really hope that you write another story to showcase your talent. Thanks!!!
You did a wonderful job on this story. Just know we will be wait on another one from you if you decide to write more. THANKS
Thank you for a wonderful ending. The way it should have been. Much more emotional and loving than IC version. You are a amazing writer and I hope we get to see more stories soon.
Thank you Cogent53, for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed it immensly and look forward to whatever other stories you might contribute in the future.
EXCEL-fucking-LENT! Stories should have happy endings always. Real life has too much drama and misery as it is. You made my day.
I hope you write some more.
I did not always comment but wanted to thank you for the great story and hope you write more soon.
that was great hope you post soon…i just crack up everytime i hear the “step off bitch” line
What a good and excellent ending story and can’t wait to see you post soon. Please keep continue with the story, thank you!
WOO HOO! that was so Beautiful Amazing Writing and Dialog WHOA! Tina she is really Great to tell Helena about yeah So STEP OFF BITCH LOL! I Love it WOW! I’m trying to go to sleep but I see you posted again Thanks Please post soon.
great story – thanks for filling in the gaps!
WOW! I just see the last THE END SNIFF SNIFF OMG! PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE.
cogent, I absolutely loved your version of the last few episodes of Season 2. Your writing style is splendid and refreshing. Thank you sooo much for sharing your talents with us. I’m incredibly happy that you decided to post this story. I truly hope you return to us with a new one soon!
Great story! please write more!! :)
EXCELLENT Story.. either continue or please write another I like your style. Thanks for taking the time.
Thankyou for you excellent story youve filled in so many blanks that were left out in the series… looking forward to more from you whenever thanks
Great story….thanks for filling in the gaps!!Please write another
thank you for that wonderful story and ending…please post the new one soon!!! we’ll all be waiting. please make it a happy story!
Brilliant, just brilliant!!
K
Wonderful story, sad it’s over. Hope you write more soon.
Great story! I have enjoyed reading it and I think you did a fabulous job of giving us some dialogues that was needed that was not in the show.
thanks- i certainly enjoyed reading this! hope to see another from you soon.
Just letting you know how much I have enjoyed this, I’m sorry that this was the last chapter and do hope that you will do another story. You are a good writer.
Thank you for a wonderful story. It filled in a lot of gaps left last season and it was wonderful to read. I hope you continue to write FanFic stories…I look forwards to them. Again, thank you.