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War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 10- THE LAST BATTLE
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Louise: “have you tried using any duct sewer system?”
Tina: “it doesn’t work… everything around that place is under protection by the magnetic field”
Willow: “maybe we could send probes to attack the headquarters and when they lower their guard, we could send the probe and the device inside”
Bette: “they may have several magnetic fields one after the other, like infinite layers”
Louise: “I see…, maybe we should use a different mean to send the device”
Tina: “like what?”
Louise: “like a person”
Bette: “are you thinking on Glory”
Willow: “I don’t think Glory is a good choice, she could betray us, she could make a deal with the first and we could lose this opportunity to defeat him”
Bette: “and if you think on sending some of us or the Scoobies, it will be a certain death for that person”
Louise: “I wasn’t thinking on Glory…, and for sure it would be very dangerous for the one who goes there…but I have an idea… though before, I would need to talk to that person first, I would like you all to come with me”
Louise left the lab and walked toward the tents where the Scoobies and their friends dwell, she talked to Giles and Buffy and all together went to Robin Wood’s tent. Louise explained to everybody about the conversation of her, Bette, Tina and Willow with Glory in her cell and the deal they made with the fallen goddess. She explained that they tried to send probes with a device to return the First to his original planet and keep him confined there, but the security system in the headquarters of the evil has been upgraded and the probes are not able to enter the place, because of the magnetic field.
Louise: “apparently the only way to approach the First is sending someone there, but it is very dangerous, and I don’t know if the First will buy it”
Robin: “I could go…, but the First could suspect of me if I suddenly show up there…”
Buffy: “do you think the First may call you? Had he summoned you before?”
Robin: “very few times, usually is when he needed something special from me”
Bette: “how does he talk to you?”
Robin: “usually through the mirror, he still does, but I only tell him the obvious things, I stopped being his spy, I only want revenge”
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Hi proteonomics,
I felt honored that you thanked me for my loyal support, thank you for that ????
You left some open end, does that mean there will be a sequel?
About the story, i loved it, i mentioned many times that i don’t understand all that you wrote about, wormholes, dimensions, alternative univers, etc, but you did a amazing job to try to explain and the story held my attention till the end!
I have to thank you for sharing this story with us and i hope you will continue to write!
Thank you ????
Hi Bibi:
Thanks so much for being a very loyal reader and commenter, and a friend. ????
About this story, as I said, I also learned many things, as most of the authors here, I also have to do some research, especially on Buffy’s fandom, and about sorcery and astral matters; the sci-fi part wasn’t hard, because is part of my background (I’m sorry if sometimes I was a little nerdish).????
Well, indeed all these stories, the prequel of this, this one I designed as a trilogy; it must be a continuation, but as you read in older Tina’s statement the next adventure will happen in seven years, so…, (lol). ????
I will continue with my other story, which I stopped to finish this and maybe after another one more, and then I will reconsider the continuation that I already called in my drafts “looking for you through the wormhole” But that has to wait, Tina and Bette have to grow up.????
Well, I’ll prepare the next chapter of the other story.
Thanks again for reading this.
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That is fantastic news that you will continue with the other story ????but please don’t wait seven years!!! Any story you will write i will read and comment on it.
And yes you are a little nerdish ???? but i don’t care. You write about what you know and love and it gives a person without knowledge about it, like me, the chance to learn about it just by reading your story. So thank you for making me a little nerdish too ????
I love and appreciate authors who put energy in their story and do research to get the facts right.
Thank you my friend ????
Thanks for the final chapter! I love happy Tibette end!
Zhenya:
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Yes, I like it when lesbian stories also end happily, especially the stories of TIBETTE.
Even when there are drama and broken hearts, I personally believe that lesbian authors should write happy endings in these stories, because it keeps the spirits of our community high.
Thanks again
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Wow! I don’t know how I missed this fic I have ben a fan fic fan since the beginning of this site. I loved every minute of this wonderful story. I don’t know if you are still writing fiction for the site or not but I would love to read more from you. I am going to look for Looking for you through the wormhole and hope you wrote and finished it. I love finding stories from our many pro B&T authors that keep them in love strong and happy. Thank you so much for writing this, I thoroughly enjoyed every word.
Thank you, for your comment.
I love sci-fi, I will write looking for you through the wormhole, not immediately because I have other stories in the way and a couple to finish.
Thanks, Take care