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War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 10- THE LAST BATTLE
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Tina: “nope…, I’m okay”
New Pasadena, the same day, 7:00 pm. New CalTech- Del Mar students’ apartments – Bette Porter and Tina Kennard’s place
Tina has taken a quick shower and wrote a note for her wife and stuck it in the front door; she prepared the bath for Bette and set the candles around the bathtub; then, went to her bedroom to prepare the half-lights, the perfume, soft music and the drinks, and finally the edible petals, everything was fine.
When Bette arrived she took the note from the door and was curious why her lover had locked the bedroom door and asked her to read the note telling her to take a bath and relax while she gets the bedroom ready. After the bath when Bette was ready, she wore the robe Tina left for her in the bathroom and knocked the door of the bedroom, which was already opened, allowing her to hear the soft music and feel the dimmed lights.
Tina: “come in and close the door…”
Bette did as her lover said, and walked toward the place from where the voice came, the bed; then she saw her, Bette was, now, used to the dim lights. Tina was naked lying on her stomach her legs open, showing the length of her inner thighs until the angle where the skin slightly darken and the folds show the way to heaven. Her knees were bent with her legs up; she was moving slowly her ankles to the sides and back and forth, her back was cover with edible petals randomly spread on her skin, showing a cluster of them strategically concentrated between the lower of her back and the top of her thighs. Bette was mesmerized; this was not the first time she saw Tina lying naked on the bed, which always aroused her, but this time it was different, Bette didn’t know why…, perhaps the position, the candy petals or maybe the whole promising foreplay
Bette: “oh my God Tina…, I love you very much, baby…, you are so beautiful…”
Tina: “before you do something, there are two conditions, first take off your robe and second…, before you touch me you have to remove the petals without use your hands and fingers…”
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Hi proteonomics,
I felt honored that you thanked me for my loyal support, thank you for that ????
You left some open end, does that mean there will be a sequel?
About the story, i loved it, i mentioned many times that i don’t understand all that you wrote about, wormholes, dimensions, alternative univers, etc, but you did a amazing job to try to explain and the story held my attention till the end!
I have to thank you for sharing this story with us and i hope you will continue to write!
Thank you ????
Hi Bibi:
Thanks so much for being a very loyal reader and commenter, and a friend. ????
About this story, as I said, I also learned many things, as most of the authors here, I also have to do some research, especially on Buffy’s fandom, and about sorcery and astral matters; the sci-fi part wasn’t hard, because is part of my background (I’m sorry if sometimes I was a little nerdish).????
Well, indeed all these stories, the prequel of this, this one I designed as a trilogy; it must be a continuation, but as you read in older Tina’s statement the next adventure will happen in seven years, so…, (lol). ????
I will continue with my other story, which I stopped to finish this and maybe after another one more, and then I will reconsider the continuation that I already called in my drafts “looking for you through the wormhole” But that has to wait, Tina and Bette have to grow up.????
Well, I’ll prepare the next chapter of the other story.
Thanks again for reading this.
P
That is fantastic news that you will continue with the other story ????but please don’t wait seven years!!! Any story you will write i will read and comment on it.
And yes you are a little nerdish ???? but i don’t care. You write about what you know and love and it gives a person without knowledge about it, like me, the chance to learn about it just by reading your story. So thank you for making me a little nerdish too ????
I love and appreciate authors who put energy in their story and do research to get the facts right.
Thank you my friend ????
Thanks for the final chapter! I love happy Tibette end!
Zhenya:
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Yes, I like it when lesbian stories also end happily, especially the stories of TIBETTE.
Even when there are drama and broken hearts, I personally believe that lesbian authors should write happy endings in these stories, because it keeps the spirits of our community high.
Thanks again
P
Wow! I don’t know how I missed this fic I have ben a fan fic fan since the beginning of this site. I loved every minute of this wonderful story. I don’t know if you are still writing fiction for the site or not but I would love to read more from you. I am going to look for Looking for you through the wormhole and hope you wrote and finished it. I love finding stories from our many pro B&T authors that keep them in love strong and happy. Thank you so much for writing this, I thoroughly enjoyed every word.
Thank you, for your comment.
I love sci-fi, I will write looking for you through the wormhole, not immediately because I have other stories in the way and a couple to finish.
Thanks, Take care