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    War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 3 – FRIENDSHIP

    Louise: “I don’t know sweetie”

    Melvin: “excuse me, Louise, I would like to answer that…; yes, I guess it is the same for all humans”

    Sharon: “if it is, probably all our beloved ones are there”

    Melvin: “I’m pretty sure that’s correct…, but we could talk about that later; now I have to let you know something unexpected, we have a couple of problems”

    Louise: “which problems?”

    Melvin: “the reptilian, the same one that the girls trapped, has escaped”

    Angus: “how could it happen, and with all the surveillance?”

    Melvin: “well…, there is more…, the alien was helped by someone”

    Kit: “who…?”

    Melvin: “Franklin Phillips”

    Sharon: “how was it possible…? Franklin was found catatonic and irresponsive”

    Melvin: “he was faking…, clearly, he was looking for an opportunity to rescue the creature, and he had it when the physicians assigned him a room in the same floor in the same hospital where the reptilian was”

    Louise: “I guess that is no the worse… who set them so close…? And, how they could flee so easily…? Someone had to help them, must be someone from the hospital”

    Melvin: “as a matter of fact, some nurses and watchmen were found drugged and hypnotized, and one of the emergency fly-trucks was missing and was found on the border of the ruins of old LA and New Pasadena”

    Angus: “you mean in Arroyo Park?”

    Melvin: “a little farther on the old road, the f-van was empty; they needed at least one accomplice”

    Louise: “well…, we have to work faster, there are enemies intruding in our town”

    After the conversation was over and the meeting finished all the members of the board of projects went to their chambers to rest and wait for the next day presentation.

     

    New Pasadena, 9:00 am. Sunday, October 21, 2057. New CalTech-Biochemistry building – Auditorium

     

    Long tables with food have been set in the back of the room, and most of the students were helping themselves with coffee, tea, fresh juices, pastries, omelets, sandwiches, fruit and soft and warm quiches. In a corner at the front are Bette, Tina, and Willow, this last one was a bundle of nerves.

    Bette: “are you feeling sick Wil?”

    Willow: “are we supposed to talk in front of all these people?”

    Comments

    1. Hello proteonomics, welcome back, you were finally able to tear yourself away from the other stories ????

      I am very happy you were able to write a new chapter.

      Both Tina and Bette are a little bit fast moving with their engagement, they belong together, but are still very young and seems to handle out of fear to lose each other to someone else.

      Still don’t have a clue sometimes what you are writing about , you try very hard to explain it, but sciencefiction is so not my thing, but i really enjoy your story and will continue to read it with great interest.

      Thanks again for the update!

    2. Hi Bibi:

      Thanks for reading, I know it is a little bit hard to bring sci-fi, especially when I’m more into Sci than in fi, but I will try to be more simple in the next chapters; I know, also, that part of this story is coming from ‘Buffy the vampire slayer’ and there were 5-6 years-story, and sometimes I have to summarize some of that; I hope it will get better, in ten days I will post the update. Thanks again for reading and commenting.

      P

      • Hi Skunk:

        Thanks do much for reading and commenting, I will post today evening or tomorrow, I just need to finish a couple of pictures. Thanks again.

        P

    3. ‘My friend proteomics.
      I am updating my reading after some time.
      I’m back .
      I loved this chapter.
      I also think it’s too early for Bette and Tina to have
      A more serious commitment, they still have no maturity to assume
      This commitment to marriage. It’s good to make the most of it.
      This moment of dating, which is very good.
      I apologize for not making a detailed comment.
      It’s just that I’m still surviving the storm I’m going through.
      Bear hug
      All universe’

      • Hi my friend:

        I’m glad that you came back, and that you liked the chapter; Bette and Tina are facing the impotence of not being able to do what they want, because they are ignoring their love ones and the civil and social order that they defend and for which they are fighting; they love each other but still need to mature; we will see how they evolve as the fight rise.
        Thank you so much for reading and commenting my friend.

        P

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