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    War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 7 – FIGHTING THE EVIL

    Another portal was created to observe life on the other planet; from where the probes reported the existence of two races, mainly reptilians on the surface and in deep caves there were ancient amorphous creatures, which could change forms assuming even humanoid shapes, there was also an enormous void space below the surface bordering the habitat of the strange creatures, all the images were recorded and instantaneously transmitted to the lab, Willow could see the entities and immediately identified them.

    Willows: “the First Evil…, they are similar to the First Evil…, how many are them? We are in danger…”

    Louise: “calm down Wil, they are far away from the Hellmouth and even if they could reach Helldom, the question is why they haven’t done that yet…? There should be a reason why they are no fighting along with the First Evil, don’t you think?”

    Willow: “right…, why aren’t they together…?”

    Bette: “maybe they are rivals…”

    Tina: “no…, they are dead…”

    Louise: “what…?”

    Tina: “look at the vital signals; we have vital signals from the First Evil at Helldom, but here, there are forms but not vital signals”

    Bette: “you mean… they are ghosts?”

    Tina: “or something like that”

    Louise: “are you sure? The reptilians have vital signals of some kind, and in the other planet the pigheaded have also vital signals…, check carefully, baby maybe the probes have misread the vital signals”

    After several trials, the team concluded that the entities underground were apparently dead, additional observation from the probes, lead to the conclusion that the Hellmouth; was built inside the planet of the dead entities, its dimensions match the size of the enormous underground void and it was ‘moved’ in some way to its current location in the planet Helldom, and was merged with the wormhole allowing the First evil to produce space-time distortions to reach and conquer other universes, but how the Hellmouth was ‘moved’ is uncertain and unknown.

    Close observation of the apparently dead entities showed they were like sad ghosts, the probes also observed a huge portal at the side of the void, as if the whole portion of underground was moved through that gate; the probes kept exploring and found small portals leading to confined inter spatial cavities for storage of strange devices, Louise decided that at least three smart probes should remain watching and to record the places for undefined time.

    Louise: “well.., we know the Hellmouth was originally part of that planet and was ‘moved’ in some way to Helldom through a portal; maybe that killed the other entities…, we may concentrate our attention in the reptilians and the pigheaded humanoids”

    The team dedicated the one and a half weeks to study the other races.

     

     

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    1. Great story proteonomics!

      I am happy that you are back with another chapter. It isn’t always easy for me to read due to the absence of knowing anything about science but i really love this story.

      I am fearfull for Bette and Tina and i hope for Tina she will never give up hope to find Bette back when she seems lost.

      Thank you so much for for this incredible story!

      • Hi Bibi:

        Thanks so much for reading and commenting, you’re right, in this story, there are lots things coming from “Buffy the vampire slayer” show, and also from my own ‘harvest’.

        I hope the next three and last chapters of this story, will be a little ‘light’ in this sense.

        Thanks again for your support.

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