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Watching
With another call the next minute – from the same number – Bette excused herself for a moment, and quietly answered with her back turned to the students.
“Hello?”
“Ms. Porter …”
“Frank – what’re you doing? I’m teaching – can’t this wait?”
“Ahh, but I’m afraid it … should not wait.”
Bette crossed her arms with a vulnerability she hated to feel in front of a large class of young adults. It was a personal call, and even with her back to the others, she felt strange. “Okay … what is it?”
“It has come to me … the identity. The woman. I’m afraid … I think I know of her. And-you-would-do-right-to-get-the-police-involved-”
The line cut after that, and Bette just stared at her phone. “What the h …” She turned back to the class, and leaned onto the desk with confusion and exhaustion, trying to keep as confident as possible. “I’m afraid something has come up. I’ll have to end it here for today. If you could all read ahead into the next two chapters for next class, that would be much appreciated.”
As the class filed out, Bette hit redial on her cell, and picked it up to her ear. She had a few questions from students while she tried to reach Frank again to gather more information. It took four tries before she finally got through.
When she heard the connection click, she listened intently to what sounded to be heavy breathing.
“Frank?! Frank … I’m worried. What’s going on? And who is she?”
“I meant to say …” he breathed, catching his breath for a moment. “I meant to say there’s … NO need for police. I … seen that there’s … no threat to you.”
But immediately, Bette heard that statement for what it was – something Frank would never say. “I seen” was one of his largest pet peeves. She held her breath and listened very carefully, listening for any sort of message he might try to give.
“Don’t listen to anyone … who tells you to stay away from ‘er – here of all places.”
Yet another word he would never use – Er. Bette was terrified – had the stalker threatened him? She was worried for Frank’s safety, and wondered if his hint meant he was there at the university with her. “Where are you?”
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(15 votes, average: 4.93 out of 5)
Scary !Thank you for the update.,great story.
Thx for your pdte, love your story. Eish this girl is scary. Pps
Sorry lets try again. Thx for your post.
Creepy! Thanks for posting!
Sophia’s a total nut job. They have an alarm system, but they haven’t thought to have the locks changed – why would they? Unfortunately, Pat can’t stay every night.
Very creepy, and there’s no telling what the stalker might do next. Thanks for the post.
Oh my God, it sounds like she might hurt Tina. I’m hooked on this story. It’s great. I love thrillers and I love Tibette. The two of them together is just PERFECTION.
I just became paranoid (more than I usually am) and locked every door and windows. LOL. So creepy.
Can’t wait to read more!
I like this story very much. and I like the thriller.
you’ve written so well that I swear, I locked the door last night. :-D
I hope she will not hurt Tina
thanks for the update
OMG im so scared for tina this wacka doo needs to be caught now pps.
I like thrillers, but not to scary.
That Sophia is one scary bitch and if she hurts Tina or Bette i will Hunt her down.
Can i volunteer to spend the evenings at their house, tot protect them?
I love the stalker intrigue. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
God she is so creepy. I can’t wait until she gets caught. Let’s hope the girls stay strong though it all.
Thanks for posting! Looking forward to the next chapter… :)
This chick needs to be caught quick, fast and in a hurry. Glad Bette and Tina were able to reconnect. Thanks for posting.
Delusional is scary. Reminds me of Bardo who shot Rebecca Schaeffer. He thought she was telling him she loved him from her television series My Sister Sam. So I guess Sophia isn’t a doppelganger or another Tina from another dimension…just a wack job! Eeks! This gives me chills! Thanks, GR, for the update.
Absolutely loving this story! The suspense is killing me, definitely refreshing to read :)
Okay, when you use terms like “loneliness” to partly describe Sophia, I kind of feel sorry for her. Then cut into the rage part and now I’m scared of her. That simple paragraph had swimming in emotions
Damn it!…how can she do that?…isn’t the police are on guard to the Porter/Kennard house hold?..
Why they didn’t see her?…they way she do it “scaled the fence from the neighbor’s yard around back “..
Must be suspicious enough to check it? …right?
It’s really getting exciting and scary! Please post soon!
Thanks for this awesome story! This is giving me the chills! I hope Bette and Tina will get a ferocious guard dog and a bodyguard each. Sophia is relentless!
This bitch is crazy