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“Bette – she’s a … she’s … good. That’s what I think of ‘er … she’s good.” But with his troubled breathing, she could hear that he was in serious danger.
“Okay,” Bette exhaled, putting out her free hand to try and think quickly. Was she on speakerphone? “Okay, that’s good. She’s no danger – I hear you, Frank … thanks.”
It sounded quiet on the other end for a moment, so she elaborated for Frank’s sake.
“That’s … great to hear. You’re someone I trust. It’s great to … have your opinion, Frank.” Bette tried thinking of something she would never say to communicate back to him that she understood, but that was difficult given the pressure of the situation. And suddenly, it came to her. “There aren’t many persons that I can trust the way I trust you … thank you.”
“Yes … okay,” he whispered, sounding full of regret, and hopeful too.
Bette thought fast – desperate to help him in some way. Where is he – within the university, but where? “I’ll just head up to your office to share some notes-”
“No!” he shouted, groaning again for another long moment. “No … I mean … I’m just so busy …”
“Okay, I’ll talk to you later,” she whispered, hanging up to dial the police. She directed them to the emergency, and grabbed her coat and her bag to run down the hall to the elevators. Everything seemed suspicious. She felt that it would all be over soon – and what would that mean? She nearly took the stairs, but then reminded herself that the elevators had cameras, and the stairs did not. So she waited and took the elevators down, running to security.
“Hi,” she panted, drawing attention from two of her students who looked on with great confusion at her frame of mind. Bette was always calm and collected, so she looked especially out of sorts. “Hi … you’ve got to send people up to Frank – Franklin Pruss’s office immediately. The police are on their way … she got past somehow … slipped by or something. She’s here.”
Two of the officers grabbed their things, and hurried over toward the stairway as Bette covered her face with her hands, and scrambled to take out her phone. She was trembling as she dialled Tina’s number – not opting for speed dial because she wasn’t thinking properly. Everything seemed to be moving at three times its normal speed. It was hard to catch her breath, but as Tina picked up on the other end, she spoke to her.
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Scary !Thank you for the update.,great story.
Thx for your pdte, love your story. Eish this girl is scary. Pps
Sorry lets try again. Thx for your post.
Creepy! Thanks for posting!
Sophia’s a total nut job. They have an alarm system, but they haven’t thought to have the locks changed – why would they? Unfortunately, Pat can’t stay every night.
Very creepy, and there’s no telling what the stalker might do next. Thanks for the post.
Oh my God, it sounds like she might hurt Tina. I’m hooked on this story. It’s great. I love thrillers and I love Tibette. The two of them together is just PERFECTION.
I just became paranoid (more than I usually am) and locked every door and windows. LOL. So creepy.
Can’t wait to read more!
I like this story very much. and I like the thriller.
you’ve written so well that I swear, I locked the door last night. :-D
I hope she will not hurt Tina
thanks for the update
OMG im so scared for tina this wacka doo needs to be caught now pps.
I like thrillers, but not to scary.
That Sophia is one scary bitch and if she hurts Tina or Bette i will Hunt her down.
Can i volunteer to spend the evenings at their house, tot protect them?
I love the stalker intrigue. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
God she is so creepy. I can’t wait until she gets caught. Let’s hope the girls stay strong though it all.
Thanks for posting! Looking forward to the next chapter… :)
This chick needs to be caught quick, fast and in a hurry. Glad Bette and Tina were able to reconnect. Thanks for posting.
Delusional is scary. Reminds me of Bardo who shot Rebecca Schaeffer. He thought she was telling him she loved him from her television series My Sister Sam. So I guess Sophia isn’t a doppelganger or another Tina from another dimension…just a wack job! Eeks! This gives me chills! Thanks, GR, for the update.
Absolutely loving this story! The suspense is killing me, definitely refreshing to read :)
Okay, when you use terms like “loneliness” to partly describe Sophia, I kind of feel sorry for her. Then cut into the rage part and now I’m scared of her. That simple paragraph had swimming in emotions
Damn it!…how can she do that?…isn’t the police are on guard to the Porter/Kennard house hold?..
Why they didn’t see her?…they way she do it “scaled the fence from the neighbor’s yard around back “..
Must be suspicious enough to check it? …right?
It’s really getting exciting and scary! Please post soon!
Thanks for this awesome story! This is giving me the chills! I hope Bette and Tina will get a ferocious guard dog and a bodyguard each. Sophia is relentless!
This bitch is crazy