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“T … T she’s here … in the building.”
“Did you call the police?!”
As short as their phone conversation was, it was informative. Tina insisted Bette be escorted out to her car, and they met at the police station for safety. Of course, as word was delivered to them, it turned out that the stalker had escaped capture. Franklin was just fine – his wrist sprained, having been wound behind his back to keep him obedient.
He was still in shock when he was taken in, but he had a name for the police. He also had the story of the stalker’s quick but pertinent visit, relayed through to Bette and Tina after their uncomfortable wait in a small room for Annette Mackerig. Bette was still not quite herself, but Tina was her strength as they sat alone in the little office. She kept her close and breathed out with relief – if nowhere else, at least they could have their privacy there.
Annette didn’t bring them much by way of good news.
“Her name’s not Tina, surprise surprise,” Annette sighed as she closed her door behind her, and went to sit behind her desk flooded with papers. “It’s Sophia Lebowitz. We’re looking into her as we speak. Your colleague Mr. Pruss told us about her. She was a case from years ago for him, when he was taking on some volunteer sessions at a clinic, and he transferred her out because she was … a handful, let’s just say. I can’t go into all her details, but Mr. Pruss spoke of her visit with him, and that she wanted to get him to sway your judgement of her, because the two of you trust one another … well. She obviously has issues.”
Bette tried to keep from allowing her panic to flare up again, and Tina was lost in thought.
“She’s listed as a serious threat, and she’ll be taken into custody as soon as we spot her,” Annette continued, licking her lips out of habit. “We’re putting a protective watch on you both. There’s no telling what she’ll do next, so we have to take precautions.”
“P-protective watch?” Bette inquired quietly, feeling Tina squeeze her hand for support.
“Yes. We’ll have a squad car outside of your house to keep watch while you’re there, and I’m requesting at the moment to have someone shadow you at your places of work. I can’t make any guarantees – this city has its share of crime and its need for cops – but I’m doing my best to keep surveillance on you at all times. She won’t be in contact with either of you again if I can help it.”
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Scary !Thank you for the update.,great story.
Thx for your pdte, love your story. Eish this girl is scary. Pps
Sorry lets try again. Thx for your post.
Creepy! Thanks for posting!
Sophia’s a total nut job. They have an alarm system, but they haven’t thought to have the locks changed – why would they? Unfortunately, Pat can’t stay every night.
Very creepy, and there’s no telling what the stalker might do next. Thanks for the post.
Oh my God, it sounds like she might hurt Tina. I’m hooked on this story. It’s great. I love thrillers and I love Tibette. The two of them together is just PERFECTION.
I just became paranoid (more than I usually am) and locked every door and windows. LOL. So creepy.
Can’t wait to read more!
I like this story very much. and I like the thriller.
you’ve written so well that I swear, I locked the door last night. :-D
I hope she will not hurt Tina
thanks for the update
OMG im so scared for tina this wacka doo needs to be caught now pps.
I like thrillers, but not to scary.
That Sophia is one scary bitch and if she hurts Tina or Bette i will Hunt her down.
Can i volunteer to spend the evenings at their house, tot protect them?
I love the stalker intrigue. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
God she is so creepy. I can’t wait until she gets caught. Let’s hope the girls stay strong though it all.
Thanks for posting! Looking forward to the next chapter… :)
This chick needs to be caught quick, fast and in a hurry. Glad Bette and Tina were able to reconnect. Thanks for posting.
Delusional is scary. Reminds me of Bardo who shot Rebecca Schaeffer. He thought she was telling him she loved him from her television series My Sister Sam. So I guess Sophia isn’t a doppelganger or another Tina from another dimension…just a wack job! Eeks! This gives me chills! Thanks, GR, for the update.
Absolutely loving this story! The suspense is killing me, definitely refreshing to read :)
Okay, when you use terms like “loneliness” to partly describe Sophia, I kind of feel sorry for her. Then cut into the rage part and now I’m scared of her. That simple paragraph had swimming in emotions
Damn it!…how can she do that?…isn’t the police are on guard to the Porter/Kennard house hold?..
Why they didn’t see her?…they way she do it “scaled the fence from the neighbor’s yard around back “..
Must be suspicious enough to check it? …right?
It’s really getting exciting and scary! Please post soon!
Thanks for this awesome story! This is giving me the chills! I hope Bette and Tina will get a ferocious guard dog and a bodyguard each. Sophia is relentless!
This bitch is crazy