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Cabin weekend – the talk
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“If I hadn’t interrupted you and Helena, how far would you have taken it?”
“I don’t know, how far do you think?” Tina asked no longer protecting Bette’s feelings.
“It didn’t look to me like you were giving her any signals that said you weren’t available. Maybe because we haven’t made that kind of commitment to each other yet you still feel like maybe you are.”
“After what I just said to you, you still doubt my commitment? Maybe I should question yours. What the hell are we doing here Bette? Are you going to throw every one of my past indiscretions in my face?”
“No Tina but we need to discuss what happened with Helena. You were flirting. I saw the flush on your face. I saw how quickly you removed your hands from hers when I walked up. You were totally enjoying the attention. You can’t deny it.”
“What you never flirt?”
“Of course I flirt but I also make my intentions clear if I don’t plan to take it any further. But it’s different for you. I think you like to see just how far you can take it. I think it feeds you. You feed off people wanting you and they do want you Tee. It’s like blood to a vampire.”
“So now I’m a vampire?”
“I just think that being desirable to other women and men for that matter is fundamental to who you are. I don’t think you’re ready to deprive yourself of that by being exclusive.”
“Bette don’t project your insecurities on me and don’t tell me what I’m ready for. If you’re concerned about me and Helena then just say what’s on your mind and stop painting this picture of what you perceive to be my sexual proclivities.”
“Fine. I’ll tell you what’s on my mind. Helena crossed a line and instead of rebuffing her advances you appear to be getting more involved with her. I didn’t say anything but I saw something in the way you two looked at each other that night on the beach when Francesca and I walked up. Then you invite her to lunch and at the same time tell me you want to take a break from us without any communication for almost week?”
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More! Loved it, thanks
BAT I think you saved your best writing for this chapter! Of course your writing is already superb!
Loved that Tina seemed to ease Bette’s insecurities and she called Bette out on inviting Sam when Bette was worried about Tina going further with Helena. Time for both to move forward trusting each other. Can’t wait for the date Tina has planned ; )
Loved it BAT!! Excellent!!
“…If they didn’t stop soon they would be making love on the grass in front of the beautiful lake.” What’s so wrong with that !
What a great chapter. You’re a talented writer. I love the way that you thoroughly develop the characters and explain their thinking and motivation.
My God! This chapter was excellent .for little
B & T almost make love on the lake,.
Very good they take your questions with this
conversation was very enlightening.
Bette and Tina beautiful movement sleep in the same
bed without clear sex, the best is yet to come.
And speaking of sleep is already 4:05 and
I’ll dormir.boa night
10 Stars.
To start your Author’s Notes with ‘Sorry to disappoint’ could not be more wrong! You do not ever ‘disappoint’!
This was a superb chapter, Thank you for not having any annoyed walking off scene.
The conversation by the Lake was great especially how you interwove some of the Show’s script but with the characters dialogue exchanged. Thanks also for the lovely explanation of ‘I know what I am and what to do with it’!
Loved it BAT and cannot wait for Weekend at the Cabin part 2!
As mscully says ’10 stars’!
Loved this chapter – like SG said, the interweaving of script with your storyline was genius. Thank you for posting.