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WESTERN SKIES
Joanna sighs and leans against the kitchen counter.
Joanna – Something changed …
Bette takes a sip of her juice.
Joanna – We don’t seem to have the same chemistry any longer.
The rancher bites her lower lip, looking pensive.
Joanna – All those beautiful actresses …
She makes her way to the window.
Joanna – I’ve seen you with the blonde.
She turns to Bette.
Joanna – Is she the one?
The rancher is taken aback.
Bette – Nothing is going on. I’m just … concentrating on my paintings lately.
The bar owner shakes her head.
Joanna – I know what this is …
She takes a step closer.
Joanna – Love always gets in the way of fun.
She caresses Bette’s cheek with the back of her hand.
Joanna – Not that I don’t know love …
She softly kisses the rancher’s lips. They look into each other’s eyes.
Joanna – If she hurts you … I’ll be here.
She smiles sadly and leaves the cabin. Bette sighs.
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Western Skies Ranch, morning: Bette rides to the ranch on Charlie. She walks around the front patio surprised with the silence. She looks around and sees nobody. The brunette climbs the steps to the porch and enters the house.
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Ranch house, morning: Kit is coming downstairs when Bette enters the house.
Kit – Hi, baby sis!
She approaches and kisses her younger sister.
Bette – Hi Kit! Where is the crew?
Kit – They may have gone to Breckenridge.
Bette – Did Tina go with them?
Kit – Probably … Why?
Bette – Nothing.
They make their way to the kitchen.
Maria – Morning, Bette!
Bette – Morning, Maria!
She grabs a muffin from a plate on the counter and takes a bite. Maria gives her a cup of coffee.
Bette – Thanks!
She takes a sip and joins her sister at the table.
Bette – I forgot how silent this place can be.
Kit – I know! I’m going to miss them when they leave.
Bette – I won’t …
The older sister smiles. Maria joins them at the table.
Maria – Jim told me that you are leaving?
Bette – Yeah … I need to make final preparations for the exhibit. It’s time!
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Zhenya says
Hi, thanks for the chapter!
I comment again when i done with reading
Zhenya says
So, Bette kissed Tina and then sleeped with Joanna? If not, how Joanna was in her cabin? Did Bette give all her fucking buddies keys from her cabin? So i think she’s sleeping with her. And in that case maybe for Tina better stay away from her – this Bette just a player
I’ll see where you go in this story
BeeCharmer says
Hi, Zhenya,
I think Joanna went to Bette’s cabin univited hoping to reconnect with her, but it didn’t happen. Apparently she also gave up, recognising that Bette has found love and kissed her goodbye. That’s how I see it, at least 😅
Zhenya says
I thought about it, but how Joanna gets the key?
We’ll see, maybe later author gives up clearing about this
BeeCharmer says
I thought about the key too, but hadn’t Tina found the cabin open too and decided to just wait on the porch, the day she “lost” Minnie? Maybe Bette never locks up the cabin’s door ????
Zhenya says
Maybe)
dbff says
This is why I said that it is fun to find out what the readers think. Zhenya, the first thing that Bette asks Joanna when she wakes up is: “What are you doing here?” And Joanna replies: “I miss you. We haven’t been together in a while.” This is a rustic cabin in Bette’s property. I don’t think she worries about keys. As Atritonia pointed out, even Tina got in uninvited at some point.
BeeCharmer says
Thank you for this first season, dbff! I enjoyed it a lot.
I love the parallelism between Minnie & Charlie and Tina & Bette and how you write as for a screenplay.
Can’t wait to read what will happen at the opening!
It was a slow burn alright! Quite the dream, the one Tina had ????
dbff says
Thanks for the help, Atritonia. You are very perceptive. And I also like the parallelism that you mention, particularly in Tina’s conversations with Minnie. I think she has a lot going on in her subconscious. :)
Silent says
Thank you for this first season!
I really enjoyed it alot
SassyGran says
Thank you for the Scene Setting First Season!
Look forward to your next post, soon I hope!
I
I am not with Zhenya and have faith in Bette.
Enjoyed first season thanks. PPS
SG
Bibi28 says
Thank you so much for the first season dbff!!!
I really enjoyed it!!!
Seems Bette should lock her cabin to make sure uninvited woman can’t enter it.
But i understood that Joanna wanted a Bette for breakfast, i would love that too ????
I am ready for the second season!!!
JBLH says
I haven’t commented on a story in awhile as I’ve been hiding as a silent reader, but I just had to hop on here and tell you how much I absolutely love this story! So much that I kept checking back frequently hoping for a new post and you never disappoint!
Can’t wait to see how it all progresses and I also like that it hasn’t felt rushed at all.
PPS!
BlueFlame7 says
Great Chapter!
BnTinmyhead says
It seems Charlie has Bette withdraws also.. just as Tina is having in her dreams. The painting of her I think will make her forget all about miss trouble making Joanna and follow her heart.
We all know she will indeed make it to the opening and be drop dead gorgeous and I think Bette is not quiet ready for the fireworks because I’m not convinced that Bette left her an invitation.
I know if Joanna can see a difference in Bette than Kit sure has and knows who has make that difference. And seeing the painting backed her theory up. Mmm… thank you loved it and can’t wait to see whats up next.
wkm says
Just caught up. Enjoyed it a lot. Thanks