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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Carrie: [laughing at her] Okay, let me know if you need anything else. [she says before walking off to attend to another customer.]
Dana: Hey Carrie?
Carrie: [walking back towards her] Yeah?
Dana: You see that women in the red shirt?
Carrie: [looking in her direction] Oh yeah, that’s Faye and she’s Dun-Away she’s a regular doesn’t play a lick of tennis but can lick the hell of the brim of a margarita glass why?
Dana: [laughing at the name and joke] I want what she’s drinking I’ve never seen it before I want to feel Dun-Away too!
Carrie: [proudly smiling] Oh, yeah that’s our new drink we added it a week ago it’s become our most popular drink want to try it?
Dana: The way I’ve been feeling lately bring it on. [Above the bar a breaking news story flashed across the 46 inch flat screen television.]
Carrie: [staring at the tv in disgust] What now?
Dana: Some woman was arrested for assault trained squirrels to attack her ex-boyfriend.
Carrie: [shaking her head in shame] Okay, I’ll be right back.
Dana: [feeling the vibrations from her phone looks down and sees Shane calling] Hey?
Shane: Hey, I’m just calling to see if you remembered about the cookout at Bette and Tinas today.
Dana: No, I haven’t forgot I’m still at the tennis club I’m headed over there as soon as I leave here why whats up?
Shane: I just called Al and she forgot all about it I’m on my way to pick her up and were heading over there together.
Dana: [curiously asks] Oh, uh is that all she said?
Shane: Well, no she also told me she had a melted snicker bar in hair.
Dana: That doesn’t surprise me.
Shane: When I was talking to her I could tell something was wrong has she mentioned anything to you?
Dana: Uh, nope. [she lied]
Shane: Well, okay cool I’m pulling up to her house now I’ll see you at Bettes and Tinas in a few. [she says before hanging up the phone]
Dana: [letting out a sigh she places her phone back into her pocket]
Carrie: [appears with her other drink and chicken wings] Here you go enjoy!
Dana: [getting an up close and personal look at the drink she smiles] What is this?
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.