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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Bette: [ignoring the questions she runs towards her however, before reaching her Kit was able to place herself in between them both]
Kit: [holding both her arms out stopping her in her tracks] HEY! WHAT’S GOING ON!?
Jenny: [yelling still covering her eyes] EVERYTHING IS DARK! ITS ALL DARK!
Bette: YOU’LL BE SEEING DARKNESS PERMANENTLY AFTER I KILL YOU! [Shane, Alice, Dana, and Helena walk over towards the commotion]
Tina: KIT, MOVE SO I CAN SHOVE MY FOOT UP HER ASS!!!!!!!
Kit: What happened!?
Bette: [takes a deep breath hoping to calm herself down]
Tina: We were in our——–.
Alice: Wait, I’m sorry [she cuts her off raising her arm in the air] but am I the only one curious to know why you two are dressed like——.”
Dana: [finishing her sentence] You just came from of a toga party!?
Shane: No…..no, there wasn’t any toga going on.
Helena: How do you know?
Shane: Look at them, hair disheveled, wrapped in bed sheets, and clearly their both naked underneath.
Jenny: [interrupting] Tina was on her back with Bette in between giving her the Lama spit! I think I’m going to be sick! [she says dry heaving]
Tina: SHUT UP!
Kit: [finally catching on] You two were having sex!?
Bette: [in a defensive tone] Yeah, what’s the problem? It’s our house we can have sex whenever we want too!
Kit: Yeah, its your house alright and yes your entitled to have sex whenever you want.
Tina: Thank y–!
Kit: [cutting her off] BUT NOT AT THE EXPENSE OF MY EMPTY STOMACH WHAT THE HELL TINA!?
Dana: You said you were going to get the food.
Alice: [sarcastically] Sounds, like she was getting feed alright!
Helena: [nudging her snickering]
Tina: Hey, I owe no one an explanation!
Jenny: Seeing Tina naked reminded me of a big piece of raw chicken!
Tina: [angrily tries to reach for her but Shane who was the closes to her holds her back]
Tina: LET ME GO SHANE!
Kit: No, don’t let her go! Look, why don’t we all come down okay Jenny you had no business spying on Bette and Tina during their private moment.
Jenny: Spying? I wasn’t spying trust me what I saw no one wants to see that I’m going to have nightmares for weeks!
Bette: KEEP HER AWAY FROM ME!!!!!!!!!!!
Tina: AND ME??
Dana: Look, why don’t you two go and get dressed I’ll grab the food.
Helena: I’ll help you.
Shane: Alice and I will set the table.
Kit: See, [looking at Bette and Tina who were still fuming] look everything is back under control.
Tina: [reluctantly] Okay, fine come on Bette.
Bette: [cuts her eyes at Jenny before returning into the house] While, Dana and Helena went inside to grab the food Kit, Alice, and Shane stare at Jenny who was still hiding behind the tree.
Alice: What is wrong with you?
Jenny: Perfection. [she says before skipping towards the hula hoop]
Shane: Ignore her come on Al.
Alice: [before walking over to the table her phone rang removing it from her pocket she looks at the caller id] Uh, give me a sec I need to take this call.
Shane: Okay.
Alice: [walking towards the far end of the backyard hoping to have some privacy answers] Tasha?
Tasha: Hey.
Alice: [was so relieved to finally hear from her she forgot to answer]
Tasha: Uh, if your busy I can call back.
Alice: No, no I’m not busy.
Tasha: Are you sure?
Alice: Yeah.
Tasha: We need to talk.
TBC
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.