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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Savannah: I’d like that.
Tasha: Uh, how does noon sound at the Cheesecake Factory?
Savannah: Sounds like a lunch date I’ll be there.
Tasha: Okay, well I’ll see you tomorrow.
Savannah: You must certainly will.
Tasha: Goodnight.
Savannah: Goodnight. [pushing the button on the elevator she didn’t have to wait long before it opened greeted by Jessie she sticks her head out then waves to Tasha.]
Tasha: [yelling] Let me know if replacing the alternator works!
Jessie: I will see ya!
Tasha: See ya!
After seeing the elevator doors close she returns to her desk. Opening the bottom desk drawer, she pulls out the spare phone charger plugging it into the phone. As the phone charged she returned to processing the government contacts. Twenty minutes later she noticed the phone was charged enough to power it back on. Once it was fully on the sound alert notification continuously went off.
Tasha: [picking up the phone in shock] 27 text messages 13 missed calls!? This has to be some mistake! [She says to herself, opening the messages once she realized who they were from hear heart beat frantically against her chest] Alice!
In shock she read each message one by one it wasn’t until she listened to the last voicemail she received she felt as if her heart stopped. I love you Alice words echoed loudly in her ear. Instantly a wave of regret washed over her as she knew agreeing to go to lunch with Savannah was a mistake.
Laras sisters house…..
Lara: [coming down the stairs smiling] Whose ready for princess pancakes!?
Olivia: [excitedly] I am! I am!
Katherine: Me too!
Lesley: [waving her hands in the air] Me three!
Lara: [stares at her]
Lesley: Okay, maybe not but you’re the famous chef and I’m hungry.
Lara: Good morning to you to sis!
Lesley: [looking up from her newspaper] Morning! How did you sleep?
Lara: [smiling] Let’s just say it was much needed.
Lesley: Good…now chip chop!
Lara: [cracking a smile entering the kitchen]
Katherine: We laid everything out as promised.
Lara: I see thank you!
Olivia: We also got this for you. [she says handing her a bag]
Lara: [taking it from her] What’s this?
Olivia: [cheerfully] Open it.
Lara: [opening the bag she pulls out the contents then holds it up]
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.