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What is love? – Chapter 21
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It was a wonderful to watch Tina, the super shopper, at work. She was at once delightful and competent. Bette was so proud that Tina belonged to herhad chosen to belong to her.
Just as Bette was about to decide that she couldn’t stand this any more, Tina found The Bed. She whipped out her tape measure to make sure it was 76 inches wide.
“T, the tag says it’s 76 inches. Why do you have to measure it?” Bette asked.
“I just want to be sure,” answered Tina seriously. Bette nodded her head just as seriously but suppressed a smile.
“Well, do we load this on the car?” Bette teased, but using a serious voice.
“Of course not, silly. They’ll deliver it.”
“They’ll need a semi tractor-trailer,” Bette commented, looking at the size of the bed.
Before going home they purchased new sheets, cream colored like the others. They looked for a cream bedspread like the one they had been using but couldn’t find a duplicate large enough for the new bed. And didn’t find anything else that either of them liked.
Bette was disappointed because she had loved her old spread. And she knew how difficult it was to find the perfect bedspread. It was a search akin to looking for the Holy Grail and you found it about as often.
Driving home, Bette unexpectedly pulled the car over to the curb, jumped out and bought flowers from a street vendor. She got back in the car and presented them to Tina.
“Thank you, baby, for taking charge of getting the bed. I was just a spectator and I enjoyed it.”
She planted a lingering kiss on Tina’s mouth. As Bette eased the car back into traffic, Tina looked at her and thought how much in love she was.
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The furniture store plus four days
The bed was delivered several days later with Tina there to receive it. The other bed was moved into their guest room. She put on the new sheets, which she had laundered in advance. She had once slept on new, unlaundered sheets and had itched and sneezed all night. She couldn’t have this happen to her and Bette. This night had to be allergy-free.
When Bette came home, Tina was there to greet her. She was fixing dinner and told Bette the new bed had arrived. Bette put down her brief case and walked into the bedroom. Tina frowned a little bit when she heard Bette chuckling.
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Great story chapter Pancha enjoyed it greatly. Pancha couldn’t Tina say I Love YOu before anytime she wanted? I don’t understand, what have I missed? Thanks for the post.
oh pancha you… trying to make things very sweet its sickening… heh, just kidding, I love sweets! I also want to see more of Bettes being-dragged-along adventures… like going to bed bath and beyond or something, shes so hopeless but still seems so lovable to tina… yup.
how great was this chappy?? i was laughing at bette, being befuddled. laughing at tina, measuring and testing. bette trying everywhich way to get tina not mad at her. oh this was just great. and the sex wasn’t bad, ahahahaha. thanks
I love to see a peevish(?) Tina + a doting(?) Bette. Yes, I agree they have a lot to learn to complete the definition of love. So we need a lot of more chapters from you. =P
Great chapter Pancha.Wasn’t expecting the NC 17 but I loved it.
what Tina mean is that now i love you is not just 3 words cuz her and Bette are feeling at the same time “i love you” have a meaning cuz everytime she say she will hear i love you too..right???..lovely and funny chapter love it..thanks your great :o)
yea was there something that was holding Tina back frim sayin her ‘i love you’ s?!
I love happy beginnings! Great chapter.
This chapter is funny and a little crazy about Tina. Damn the love scene is hot and love it. Ok post soon please, thanks!
“And Bette stayed inside her lover and moved inside her lover until Tina was spent.”
Now, that is almost biblical in its cadence.
Queen James Version. Ha ha ha.
I luvs me some scripture…
Pancha, I want to lean over and kiss the keyboard that your fingers had trod upon.
Yes, this was a mighty tasty chapter.
“Can’t get enough of it good”
“Kiss Miss Remington Selectric Underwood good”
That’s before most of y’alls time…Heavy metal…
I think I need to go shopping for a bigger bed. Thanks for the post pancha
wonderful chapter, funny and sweet, just the way i like my B&T to be…thank you
Great chapter keep on posting!!!
Are they living now with each other? I thought they just got back together? Great story as always though!!
I just read all your last 3 chapters, and WOW i was rooting for Bette to finally say I LOVE YOU and mean it.. the bed huanting was fun, i was just doing the same thing last week, although i’m the one who needs a new bed, my best friend was Tina and i was Bette..
I think it how Tina teased Bette was so sweet.. ok i better stop, but i’m so happy for both of them.. =D
you are good…!!real good.!
Too, too, good. No, far too good. I love it. Thank you.
Repetitive as I may be sounding, I must tell you again just how delightful and compelling your quirky, vulnerable Tina and doting Bette are. Here is something that you capture subtly that I particularly appreciate: the fact that Tina was the first one to fall, the first one to admit and the first one to yield may have led us to believe her to be “doormat”-ish. However, your writing beautifully makes clear just how much power Tina has in this relationship and, now, how she is secure enough in taht power to display her displeasures and her grouchiness. Bette’s “tolerant affection,” on display here and in the football chapter, are very appealing to me.
The sex was great,but the I love you was the greatest. Poor old Mench is one of my favorite player,reminds me of Dana. The last time the yankee were in town Got Joe Torres autography. Love this chapter post soon
I had to chuckle at Bette ” this is a good bed for a fight, I don’t have to sleep on the couch because I am already in the living room” To funny..Great story pancha, will be waiting for more.