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What is love? – Chapter 21
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Silence from across the bed. (Casualness still didn’t work.)
“Well, this is a good bed for a fight. I don’t have to sleep on the couch because I’m already so far away from you, I’m practically in the living room.” .
No response from Tina but Bette knew she wasn’t asleep. (Humor didn’t work.)
“Putting the old bedspread on the bed like that was great, baby. I don’t think out of the box very much, in home stuff, and I would never have thought of it.”
Still no response. (Compliments didn’t work.)
Bette realized that she had teased too hard and it hurt Tina’s feelings. She was discovering quickly that this “being in love” was going to take lots of learning. Maybe a couple more weeks, she thought.
“T, I’m so lucky to have you and I know it. I’m sorry I teased you. Please don’t be mad at me.” Bette waited for a few minutes. (Apology didn’t work.)
“I love you, baby. Good night.” Bette waited, then sighed and rolled over to her right to turn out her bed lamp. (Sweet talk didn’t work.)
When she rolled over to lie on her back, Tina was right next to her. She climbed on top of Bette and kissed her. Bette realized instantly that Tina was naked.
“Baby,” Bette said softly, putting her arms around Tina. She began running her hands down Tina’s back to her hips.
“You teased me a bunch and I wanted to tease you back, a little. I love you.”
Tina had taken Bette’s head in her hands and began a deep, passionate kiss. After a few moments, Tina pulled away from Bette and said, “Take your clothes off. And turn the light on first because I want to watch you. And then let’s make love.”
“Take your shirt off first,” Tina asked. And Bette did so. Tina never got tired of looking at her lover and she had missed her so much.
Bette smiled as she watched Tina looking at her as she shed her clothes. When she started to get back in bed, Tina stopped her.
“Wait a minute. Just a minute,” Tina said.
Bette always looked perfect. Everything was perfect. It was as though a great sculptor had taken a piece of creamy brown marble and created the perfect woman. Her shoulders were just right. Not too broad or too narrow. They tapered into beautiful, strong arms and Tina felt a lump in her throat from thinking about how exciting and safe those arms were.
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Great story chapter Pancha enjoyed it greatly. Pancha couldn’t Tina say I Love YOu before anytime she wanted? I don’t understand, what have I missed? Thanks for the post.
oh pancha you… trying to make things very sweet its sickening… heh, just kidding, I love sweets! I also want to see more of Bettes being-dragged-along adventures… like going to bed bath and beyond or something, shes so hopeless but still seems so lovable to tina… yup.
how great was this chappy?? i was laughing at bette, being befuddled. laughing at tina, measuring and testing. bette trying everywhich way to get tina not mad at her. oh this was just great. and the sex wasn’t bad, ahahahaha. thanks
I love to see a peevish(?) Tina + a doting(?) Bette. Yes, I agree they have a lot to learn to complete the definition of love. So we need a lot of more chapters from you. =P
Great chapter Pancha.Wasn’t expecting the NC 17 but I loved it.
what Tina mean is that now i love you is not just 3 words cuz her and Bette are feeling at the same time “i love you” have a meaning cuz everytime she say she will hear i love you too..right???..lovely and funny chapter love it..thanks your great :o)
yea was there something that was holding Tina back frim sayin her ‘i love you’ s?!
I love happy beginnings! Great chapter.
This chapter is funny and a little crazy about Tina. Damn the love scene is hot and love it. Ok post soon please, thanks!
“And Bette stayed inside her lover and moved inside her lover until Tina was spent.”
Now, that is almost biblical in its cadence.
Queen James Version. Ha ha ha.
I luvs me some scripture…
Pancha, I want to lean over and kiss the keyboard that your fingers had trod upon.
Yes, this was a mighty tasty chapter.
“Can’t get enough of it good”
“Kiss Miss Remington Selectric Underwood good”
That’s before most of y’alls time…Heavy metal…
I think I need to go shopping for a bigger bed. Thanks for the post pancha
wonderful chapter, funny and sweet, just the way i like my B&T to be…thank you
Great chapter keep on posting!!!
Are they living now with each other? I thought they just got back together? Great story as always though!!
I just read all your last 3 chapters, and WOW i was rooting for Bette to finally say I LOVE YOU and mean it.. the bed huanting was fun, i was just doing the same thing last week, although i’m the one who needs a new bed, my best friend was Tina and i was Bette..
I think it how Tina teased Bette was so sweet.. ok i better stop, but i’m so happy for both of them.. =D
you are good…!!real good.!
Too, too, good. No, far too good. I love it. Thank you.
Repetitive as I may be sounding, I must tell you again just how delightful and compelling your quirky, vulnerable Tina and doting Bette are. Here is something that you capture subtly that I particularly appreciate: the fact that Tina was the first one to fall, the first one to admit and the first one to yield may have led us to believe her to be “doormat”-ish. However, your writing beautifully makes clear just how much power Tina has in this relationship and, now, how she is secure enough in taht power to display her displeasures and her grouchiness. Bette’s “tolerant affection,” on display here and in the football chapter, are very appealing to me.
The sex was great,but the I love you was the greatest. Poor old Mench is one of my favorite player,reminds me of Dana. The last time the yankee were in town Got Joe Torres autography. Love this chapter post soon
I had to chuckle at Bette ” this is a good bed for a fight, I don’t have to sleep on the couch because I am already in the living room” To funny..Great story pancha, will be waiting for more.