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What is love? – Chapter 21
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Bette’s first look at the bed had puzzled her. The old cream bedspread was there but how could that be? Then she quickly realized that the spread was just perched on top of the bed like a slice of cheese on a piece of bread.. It didn’t hang down at the sides or the foot and looked so ludicrous that it gave Bette the giggles.
Bette was still standing there chuckling and looking at it when Tina walked in.
“Baby, it looks like a piece of cheese on”
“I think it’s a good idea.” interrupted Tina, pursing her lips.
“We could start a new decorating trend,” Bette said dryly.
“Well, it will still keep the sheets covered during the day and you love that spread,” Tina said defensively. “Dinner will be served in five minutes.” Tina exited the room
Bette changed clothes, still chuckling, and joined Tina in the kitchen. They ate supper without much discussion. Tina looked annoyed and Bette kept smiling. She wasn’t sure why it struck her so funny, but it did. Maybe she was extra tired from work.
After they finished eating, Tina refused Bette’s help. Bette sat and watched TV, hoping that Tina would join her on the couch, but she didn’t. Tina kept doing things in the kitchen and these after-dinner chores seemed louder than usual.
Eventually Bette decided it was time to turn in.
“I’m going to take a shower, baby,” Bette announced.
No response except continuing loud sounds from Tina in the kitchen.
When she finished showering, she changed into draw-string pajama pants and a loose tank top which she had brought into the bathroom.
When she emerged into the bedroom, Tina was already in bed.waaaaay on her sideturned away from Bette’s sidewith the covers pulled up to her earswith the light turned off on her night stand. Bette glumly got in on her side of the bed and lay flat on her back. She had not planned for their first night in the new bed to be like this, but she knew this was not the time for her to touch her girlfriend.
“This feels really comfortable.” Bette tried to start a light conversation.
There was no response from Tina. (Casualness didn’t work.)
“These new sheets feel great.”
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Great story chapter Pancha enjoyed it greatly. Pancha couldn’t Tina say I Love YOu before anytime she wanted? I don’t understand, what have I missed? Thanks for the post.
oh pancha you… trying to make things very sweet its sickening… heh, just kidding, I love sweets! I also want to see more of Bettes being-dragged-along adventures… like going to bed bath and beyond or something, shes so hopeless but still seems so lovable to tina… yup.
how great was this chappy?? i was laughing at bette, being befuddled. laughing at tina, measuring and testing. bette trying everywhich way to get tina not mad at her. oh this was just great. and the sex wasn’t bad, ahahahaha. thanks
I love to see a peevish(?) Tina + a doting(?) Bette. Yes, I agree they have a lot to learn to complete the definition of love. So we need a lot of more chapters from you. =P
Great chapter Pancha.Wasn’t expecting the NC 17 but I loved it.
what Tina mean is that now i love you is not just 3 words cuz her and Bette are feeling at the same time “i love you” have a meaning cuz everytime she say she will hear i love you too..right???..lovely and funny chapter love it..thanks your great :o)
yea was there something that was holding Tina back frim sayin her ‘i love you’ s?!
I love happy beginnings! Great chapter.
This chapter is funny and a little crazy about Tina. Damn the love scene is hot and love it. Ok post soon please, thanks!
“And Bette stayed inside her lover and moved inside her lover until Tina was spent.”
Now, that is almost biblical in its cadence.
Queen James Version. Ha ha ha.
I luvs me some scripture…
Pancha, I want to lean over and kiss the keyboard that your fingers had trod upon.
Yes, this was a mighty tasty chapter.
“Can’t get enough of it good”
“Kiss Miss Remington Selectric Underwood good”
That’s before most of y’alls time…Heavy metal…
I think I need to go shopping for a bigger bed. Thanks for the post pancha
wonderful chapter, funny and sweet, just the way i like my B&T to be…thank you
Great chapter keep on posting!!!
Are they living now with each other? I thought they just got back together? Great story as always though!!
I just read all your last 3 chapters, and WOW i was rooting for Bette to finally say I LOVE YOU and mean it.. the bed huanting was fun, i was just doing the same thing last week, although i’m the one who needs a new bed, my best friend was Tina and i was Bette..
I think it how Tina teased Bette was so sweet.. ok i better stop, but i’m so happy for both of them.. =D
you are good…!!real good.!
Too, too, good. No, far too good. I love it. Thank you.
Repetitive as I may be sounding, I must tell you again just how delightful and compelling your quirky, vulnerable Tina and doting Bette are. Here is something that you capture subtly that I particularly appreciate: the fact that Tina was the first one to fall, the first one to admit and the first one to yield may have led us to believe her to be “doormat”-ish. However, your writing beautifully makes clear just how much power Tina has in this relationship and, now, how she is secure enough in taht power to display her displeasures and her grouchiness. Bette’s “tolerant affection,” on display here and in the football chapter, are very appealing to me.
The sex was great,but the I love you was the greatest. Poor old Mench is one of my favorite player,reminds me of Dana. The last time the yankee were in town Got Joe Torres autography. Love this chapter post soon
I had to chuckle at Bette ” this is a good bed for a fight, I don’t have to sleep on the couch because I am already in the living room” To funny..Great story pancha, will be waiting for more.