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What will she do next? 11
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Bette relaxed completely and somehow found the words that had previously escaped her.
“I just do,” she began softly, ” I love your beauty and your intelligence, you are so much more smarter than me, you see things in people that I didn’t know existed. You are a wonderful mother to our daughter and a generous and loyal friend. I admire you so muchyou have no idea how much.”
Tina blushed and beamed widely. ‘Okay so you got that right Porter, just keep going and take deep breaths,’ Bette tried to calm herself.
Of course it didn’t help that Tina’s hand was now drawing circles on Bette’s thigh.
Bette cleared her throat softly and was certain that she saw Tina’s lip curl slightly in a sadistic smile usually attributed to her having dirty little thoughts.
“We need to tell each other when things are bothering usdo you agree T?”
Tina had switched off after she heard what she wanted to hear and now was focussed on finding out what colour underwear Bette had on today. Tina moved her hand ever so slightly so that she was now caressing Bette’s inner thigh.
“T?” Bette got no response so she tried again, “Tina? Are you listening to me?” apparently Tina was not, as she leaned in again and rested her head in the nook of Bette’s neck.
“Shhh!” she whispered softly, “Let’s just stay quiet like this for a little whilewe haven’t been this close in each other’s company for a long whilecan we just enjoy the moment?”
All Bette could do was release a contented sigh.
*
The lunchtime rush was just starting to spill over when Tina and Bette decided to part. They spent the morning touching, talking but mostly touching.
As Bette had made plans to spend the rest of the afternoon with Kit, Tina retrieved her now sleeping daughter and made her way to say goodbye to her partner.
Tina’s heart warmed when Bette looked at their daughter and gently kissed Angelica on her forehead while embracing both of them tightly. Walking both of them to the parked car Bette spoke again.
“I love you bothso very much, you know that right?” she spoke with a cracked voice and watery eyes.
Tina nodded emphatically rendered speechless, before securing the baby in the child seat and getting in herself to drive away. As she started the engine on the navy blue Saab 95 station wagon that Bette had bought her months earlier she dropped the window and asked,
“You’ll call me tonight?”
Bette smiled lovingly and replied, “You know that I will.” Before watching two of the three most important people in her life drive off to join the noisy traffic.
*
Bette returned to her temporary hide out late that evening to resume what was left of her mini break. She had felt a lot better for seeing Tina, and now knowing that Kit was definitely on the mend made her heart suddenly soar. She allowed a sigh of relief to escape her lips. ‘This is how life is supposed to be,’ she thought quietly before running into the ocean for a quick swim.
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This was a great post. Happy to see that you have Kit on the mend and most importantly you have Bette & Tina talking. They must continue to talk and stop running from each other when a problem arises. Please get them back in the house together and let them continue to come together. Thanks. Post soon please.
Running into the Ocean NAKED…HOT MAMA..GREAT CHAPTER AS ALWAYS..THANKS
^5 Ayesha, I agree…..Bette is beautiful and desirable also, and since in this story Tina F***ed up, she should be the one to sweat a little more.
Tina knows that Bette loves her and the baby. Tina sorta f%^%ked up. Maybe she is on solid ground again. Some women,after a birth of a child get messed up . Maybe Tina did. lets hope she did. thanks
anyone else think tina just wants some ass and bette might be trying to work on the problems??
maybe tina needs to go swimming and get a quick beat down by a seal. lmao
I just found out I have miss a few updates…bad me… bad bad me..How can I miss those I love your story so much. I really love the way you write. I have read a lot of fanfic and I have to say this story clearly is one of my top ten stories…. make that top five.
There is so many emotions and feelings like in CH 7 The pain Bette was feeling at that moment in the hospital knowing T was with HIM… that was so down. And later I could feel the love she still had for her family as she was showing T how much she cared and longed for her and to be with her. It was just slipping away with every effort she made to show. Just slipping away like she felt T slip through her fingers.
I’m glad they are now talking again and slowly, real slowly coming back together. I wonder if T will tel Bette soon what really happened that night. I know Bette won’t like to hear it but I know if she really listens she will know there is so much hope for both of them.
Well I can make this reply really long like 5 pages or so… but that means you will have less time to write so what I really wanted to say is I loved the update and I can’t wait for more … thank you.
Beautifully written. It’s so clearly evident they love and need each other. I’m glad Tina finally recognized who she needs. Please post soon. I can’t get enough of this story. :p
Good chapter. Glad they talk and Tina know who she need in her life now and let see what’s next, thanks!
Awesome. I’m glad Tina came back to reality. Keep it coming.
Arent those California Oceans riddled with sharks??? Great Whites:-) Just kidding. Anyways what a treat didnt expect any posts from you today. So I am pleasantly surprised, as always enjoyed it immensely. I’ll leave the re-reading until later…
I am liking these 2 when they talk. they still have more to sort through, but hopefully they will be honest. It seems like Tina likes to use sex to distract Bette when they should be discussing their relationship.
the name you picked as your moniker is not lost on me, I know you must favor Lu, but it would be nice to see Tina work harder for Bette’s affection. Most of these stories all have Bette turning to mush when she see Tina. Bette is beautiful and desirable also, and since in this story Tina F***ed up, she should be the one to sweat a little more.
I can’t wait to see how they work this out. your dialogue rings true. keep up the work, and I will continue to read.
It really is so hard for these two to communicate isn’t it? Sounds to me like they have a difficult road ahead of them. I’m ready to see where you are doing to take us Crush and thanks for giving us a moment of happiness.
amazing..finnaly the Tina we love came back to her sense..cant wait for them really reconnect if you know what i mean..lol..and i hope Kit stay healthy…another amazing chapter post real soon