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What will she do next? 11
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“How do you know that you love me?” she asked simply, completely throwing Bette off balance again.
Bette recovered well however, “because you dismantle meI am on uncertain ground whenever you are around and one look from you makes me giddy.”
“Sounds like you have food poisoning,” clearly this was not what Tina wanted to hear.
Bette sighed, realising that Tina deliberately took Bette literally, so she tried again.
“Tina, you complete meyou are my rock, you are so much stronger than I am and so grounded, you keep me grounded,” the artist in Bette was making her speak in metaphors and she was starting to get a little annoyed with herself.
‘Cut the bull Porter, just tell her, tell her that she means everything to you, tell her that her opinions, her ideas, her thoughts and her very existence mean the world to youjust tell her.’ Bette was screaming in her head.
Tina looked at her oddly for a moment, as if she heard the mental argument and found it amusing.
“Really?” Tina replied and it sounded to Bette that she was being a bit sarcastic. “Well, I love you because of your confidence, your assertiveness and your ability to find beauty all around you.” Tina concluded as her hand withdrew from Bette’s thigh.
Bette sighed.
“Why do you do that Tina?”
“Do what?” she asked evenly.
“Thatthat passive aggressive crapI’ve never called you up on it before but now it’sit’s just too much. Whenever you don’t get what you want, or hear what you want you do that…that thing.
This time it was Tina who sighed. She had wanted Bette to say that she loved her mind as well as her body and soul, but she didn’t.
Instead Bette struggled with something, that Tina couldn’t quite fathom.
Tina leaned closer and reached for Bette’s hand again giving it a squeeze once more, but this time Tina lay her palm flat on Bette’s thigh. The action was meant to serve as part of an apology and to ease the tension in Bette that had reared it’s ugly head.
“I’m sorry,” Tina began, I know that I do it, and I’m working on it okay? Now tell me again why you love me,” she said seductively.
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This was a great post. Happy to see that you have Kit on the mend and most importantly you have Bette & Tina talking. They must continue to talk and stop running from each other when a problem arises. Please get them back in the house together and let them continue to come together. Thanks. Post soon please.
Running into the Ocean NAKED…HOT MAMA..GREAT CHAPTER AS ALWAYS..THANKS
^5 Ayesha, I agree…..Bette is beautiful and desirable also, and since in this story Tina F***ed up, she should be the one to sweat a little more.
Tina knows that Bette loves her and the baby. Tina sorta f%^%ked up. Maybe she is on solid ground again. Some women,after a birth of a child get messed up . Maybe Tina did. lets hope she did. thanks
anyone else think tina just wants some ass and bette might be trying to work on the problems??
maybe tina needs to go swimming and get a quick beat down by a seal. lmao
I just found out I have miss a few updates…bad me… bad bad me..How can I miss those I love your story so much. I really love the way you write. I have read a lot of fanfic and I have to say this story clearly is one of my top ten stories…. make that top five.
There is so many emotions and feelings like in CH 7 The pain Bette was feeling at that moment in the hospital knowing T was with HIM… that was so down. And later I could feel the love she still had for her family as she was showing T how much she cared and longed for her and to be with her. It was just slipping away with every effort she made to show. Just slipping away like she felt T slip through her fingers.
I’m glad they are now talking again and slowly, real slowly coming back together. I wonder if T will tel Bette soon what really happened that night. I know Bette won’t like to hear it but I know if she really listens she will know there is so much hope for both of them.
Well I can make this reply really long like 5 pages or so… but that means you will have less time to write so what I really wanted to say is I loved the update and I can’t wait for more … thank you.
Beautifully written. It’s so clearly evident they love and need each other. I’m glad Tina finally recognized who she needs. Please post soon. I can’t get enough of this story. :p
Good chapter. Glad they talk and Tina know who she need in her life now and let see what’s next, thanks!
Awesome. I’m glad Tina came back to reality. Keep it coming.
Arent those California Oceans riddled with sharks??? Great Whites:-) Just kidding. Anyways what a treat didnt expect any posts from you today. So I am pleasantly surprised, as always enjoyed it immensely. I’ll leave the re-reading until later…
I am liking these 2 when they talk. they still have more to sort through, but hopefully they will be honest. It seems like Tina likes to use sex to distract Bette when they should be discussing their relationship.
the name you picked as your moniker is not lost on me, I know you must favor Lu, but it would be nice to see Tina work harder for Bette’s affection. Most of these stories all have Bette turning to mush when she see Tina. Bette is beautiful and desirable also, and since in this story Tina F***ed up, she should be the one to sweat a little more.
I can’t wait to see how they work this out. your dialogue rings true. keep up the work, and I will continue to read.
It really is so hard for these two to communicate isn’t it? Sounds to me like they have a difficult road ahead of them. I’m ready to see where you are doing to take us Crush and thanks for giving us a moment of happiness.
amazing..finnaly the Tina we love came back to her sense..cant wait for them really reconnect if you know what i mean..lol..and i hope Kit stay healthy…another amazing chapter post real soon