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Who am I? But more importantly who the fuck are you? (10)
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Both of them found their feet and fell into a fighting stance. Each was waiting for the other to attack. Tinas eyes narrowed and she tucked her elbows in a little closer. Dana slowly shifted her weight onto her back foot ready to snap out a kick if Tina moved in.
A loud scream broke the tension. It allowed them all to re-evaluate the situation and realise how ***** stupid it was
It came from the other room. Behind the door being guarded by another of Danas teddy bears. Dana knew that it must have been Bette and Tina knew that scream well enough to know it was Bette. Dana backed away to go check it out. Tina looked as if she was compelled to follow. Amanda using her perception saw the conflict Agent Kennard, Would you kindly sit and wait in here until the situation has been dealt with Gesturing to the conference room.
Tina grunted and went in and sat in a huff, sinking into one of the plush leather chairs looking daggers into Amanda who was sitting across from her completely unfazed. About 30 seconds passed until Tina thought ***** this and stood up and stormed off.
Amanda stood to go after her but as she followed Tina out the door there was a sickening crack as Tina flung the door back into Amandas face. Completely by accident of course. With a thud Tina saw Amandas unconscious body hit the ground. Tina couldnt help the little grin that played on the corner of her lips.
Tina set off down the hall in the direction that Dana had disappeared
Dana Arrived in the room just in time to see Bette fall on her ***** after coming out of the vent.
Bette looked at Dana with eyes as wide as saucers There w .. wa .. was a r .. r..rat in there she said her top lip trembling.
Dana rolled her eyes ***** I dont have the energy for this she thought
Bette honey, youll be ok Dana was only comforting her because the last thing she needed right now was Bette in hysterics. Bettes eyes welled with tears
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LB, you have a new fan, I do have to say you are up there with jade/janet and windrider, and if there are any other writers that have twisted plots then please tell me. I love these stories maybe you should pair up with jade god knows she needs to come back. You know I’m a B/T fan put i get so fucking sick of tina as a granola. It’s about time someone gave her some balls, and Dana fucking funny, I always knew she had a 9mm in her tennis bag.Bette in the air vent had me on the ground and the rat just added to it. And thank god someone finally shot Bette why didn’t tina say anything like haha or you know something funny, anyways. I hope you post soon. There are so many other things I want to say the whole marina thing in the bushes wow she is a crazy chick. And LB were can I get a vest like tina had that might come in handy one of these days for me.
LB just wondering how your golf game was going, I just started playing, ok I’m lieing, I just like to drive the cart around and leave big ruts in the green grass, so far have broken 2 windows and can hit the ball about 100 ft, it’s getting better, I’m having a blast.
about flipping time you came back. I am in south Vic too… maybe we are nearby each other, and don’t even know it. Well… I remember why i love your writing. I am officially rehooked, and not so patiently awaiting the next chapter. I am guessing that bette is now dead from Shane’s shot…… so, you really are killing them one by one? hee hee… good plan, and I can’t wait to see who cops it next time. LOL post again soon, if you can…. and I hope that the accidents stop coming your way.
please somone comment or i will cry ….. or write me at: katya_114@hotmail.com
good chapter, although i think need to look at the previous chapters to follow the story. but please continue, i am interested to see what happens.
I was laughing my ass off. And yes, we Yankees understand centimeters and millimeters
Yay you’re back! It was as good as ever. Please post again soon…
Well I’m still here and I still love the story. Good Job.
DUUUUUDEEE!!! ur bak! hellz yea this is partly my fault! ur humour is too much sometimes seriously u crack me up, I love Bette gettin shot multiple times, having her as a weak charecter totally fits who she actually is (I realise I may get lynched for that comment!)
I mean this in the best way possible but hopefully u will take ur time healin.. dont wanna get bak in the fray too soon yunno, chill out a little let the creativity run free!! rite enuff yabberin.. Dana is still a hott bitch oh and wtf is Alice!!!! long live Marina!
See ya on the otherside LB MWAH!!
The amazing ladybiege is back!!! you have made my week! Great chapter, keep em coming!
ok so this is the first time I have read your story so why am I sitting laughing my ass off, I don’t know but this was some funny ass shit. I will be back to comment again after I read the story from the start, I hope you go on I hate when you get into a story and the writer goes MIA
mad crazy but i’m loving it, update soon.
Awesome…I just read all your posts and the story got better and better…glad to see you carried this one on…and I am gonna guess that Alice and Bette aren’t your favorite characters????…anyhow…keep it coming