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    Who am I? But more importantly who the fuck are you? (10)

    Story written on July 4, 2005 by LadyBeige.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55183
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    Just read the damn piece if you want a story that could never happen and should never happen. umm Bett gets shot. I know its been a while.

     

    Dana slowly lowered one hand from her gun to let it hang by her side. The bottle of bourbon was only centimeters (sorry inches for the Americans out there) away from her finger tips. If she could just shoot Tina then she could take a swig Or a better thought, she could throw the bottle at Tina and not get shot

     

    As each of the women took a sharp breath and lunged in unison towards their chosen objects they saw the other move. Tina squeezed her trigger a second before Dana did. Her round just grazed Danas bicep. Danas shot whizzed by Tinas ear. Literally millimeters away (for Americans that is really small) 

     

    Tina got off a second shot this time hitting Dana in the chest. Not Fatal Tina thought. The shot had hit Dana low in the ribs relatively far off from the center line of the body. Dana was at the disadvantage and Tina seized on that. Now back on Balance Tina shot Dana again, this time in the shoulder of the arm with the gun. Dana was helpless.

     

    WHAT THE *****! Screamed Shane. She was standing in the doorway. All Shane could see was Tina pumping rounds into Dana and a blood soaked Bette lying on the floor.

     

    All that Tina saw was the ***** huge magnum that Shane was pointing her way.

     

    Dana saw that this was probably a good time to play dead. Not to mention she did feel a little sleepy right now. Probably the pain

     

    Tina Shane whispered How could you. Why? How? I I I dont understand

     

    Tina sighed, Shane this isnt how it looks She started.

     

    Shane just closed her eyes, whispered “*****, this is for my father” and shot Tina.

     

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    Tina slowly came to. She knew that the Kevlar vest she was wearing had just saved her life. She had chosen to go for the one with the burst packs. These were packs filled with a substance that resembled blood which would conveniently seep out around the wound giving the attacker a sense of achievement. In other words it looked like Tina was dead.

     

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    1. LB, you have a new fan, I do have to say you are up there with jade/janet and windrider, and if there are any other writers that have twisted plots then please tell me. I love these stories maybe you should pair up with jade god knows she needs to come back. You know I’m a B/T fan put i get so fucking sick of tina as a granola. It’s about time someone gave her some balls, and Dana fucking funny, I always knew she had a 9mm in her tennis bag.Bette in the air vent had me on the ground and the rat just added to it. And thank god someone finally shot Bette why didn’t tina say anything like haha or you know something funny, anyways. I hope you post soon. There are so many other things I want to say the whole marina thing in the bushes wow she is a crazy chick. And LB were can I get a vest like tina had that might come in handy one of these days for me.

    2. LB just wondering how your golf game was going, I just started playing, ok I’m lieing, I just like to drive the cart around and leave big ruts in the green grass, so far have broken 2 windows and can hit the ball about 100 ft, it’s getting better, I’m having a blast.

    3. about flipping time you came back. I am in south Vic too… maybe we are nearby each other, and don’t even know it. Well… I remember why i love your writing. I am officially rehooked, and not so patiently awaiting the next chapter. I am guessing that bette is now dead from Shane’s shot…… so, you really are killing them one by one? hee hee… good plan, and I can’t wait to see who cops it next time. LOL post again soon, if you can…. and I hope that the accidents stop coming your way.

    5. good chapter, although i think need to look at the previous chapters to follow the story. but please continue, i am interested to see what happens.

    9. DUUUUUDEEE!!! ur bak! hellz yea this is partly my fault! ur humour is too much sometimes seriously u crack me up, I love Bette gettin shot multiple times, having her as a weak charecter totally fits who she actually is (I realise I may get lynched for that comment!)
      I mean this in the best way possible but hopefully u will take ur time healin.. dont wanna get bak in the fray too soon yunno, chill out a little let the creativity run free!! rite enuff yabberin.. Dana is still a hott bitch oh and wtf is Alice!!!! long live Marina!
      See ya on the otherside LB MWAH!!

    11. ok so this is the first time I have read your story so why am I sitting laughing my ass off, I don’t know but this was some funny ass shit. I will be back to comment again after I read the story from the start, I hope you go on I hate when you get into a story and the writer goes MIA

    13. Awesome…I just read all your posts and the story got better and better…glad to see you carried this one on…and I am gonna guess that Alice and Bette aren’t your favorite characters????…anyhow…keep it coming

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