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Who am I? But more importantly who the fuck are you? (10)
No Bette dont cry said Dana groaning on the inside. What the ***** was going on with the world these days?
Dana decided this was getting out of hand. She went to Bettes side, took her hand and pulled her to her feet and made her sit on the edge of the desk
Bettes eyes were still shimmering but her lip had stopped trembling. (though she was letting out the occasional hiccup.)
Dana reached over and poured a glass of water for Bette. She watched as Bette took a sip. There we go now isnt that better. Now I just
Tinas voice cut across from the hallway. Now isnt this cozy?
Tina? Bettes voice was extremely high pitched
***** Tina let fly. She couldnt believe that Bette was here voluntarily. Her and Dana sitting here all happy happy la la.
Oh thank god you came for me Bette said, her voice still several octaves above normal.
Cut the ***** Bette Tina responded
Bette looked confused But she stammered. Tina couldnt possibly think that
Tina decided she was more than a little sick of this. Honestly the whole ***** world was going insane. Tina pulled out her nine millimeter and calmly leveled it a Bette. Without hesitation she shot Bette in the shoulder. Betted slumped on the desk before slipping to the floor and catching her head on the edge of the desk. Out cold from shock and well hitting her head. Teach her to go ***** around on me at the very least Tina though darkly.
By the time she swung around to face Dana she was already staring down the bitchs barrel. They stood there poised in a standoff. Woman v Woman.
That was a very stupid thing to do Dana said in her ice like voice
Well Dana perhaps Im just a very stupid person Tina said evenly
Fishing for compliments Kennard?
Tina let out a barking laugh during which her eyes never left Danas
You know Dane, youre a funny *****
Tina knew that on the ground just a fraction to her left was the metal grill from the vent. If she could only get to it and perhaps kick it into Danas eyes, she only needed a second
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LB, you have a new fan, I do have to say you are up there with jade/janet and windrider, and if there are any other writers that have twisted plots then please tell me. I love these stories maybe you should pair up with jade god knows she needs to come back. You know I’m a B/T fan put i get so fucking sick of tina as a granola. It’s about time someone gave her some balls, and Dana fucking funny, I always knew she had a 9mm in her tennis bag.Bette in the air vent had me on the ground and the rat just added to it. And thank god someone finally shot Bette why didn’t tina say anything like haha or you know something funny, anyways. I hope you post soon. There are so many other things I want to say the whole marina thing in the bushes wow she is a crazy chick. And LB were can I get a vest like tina had that might come in handy one of these days for me.
LB just wondering how your golf game was going, I just started playing, ok I’m lieing, I just like to drive the cart around and leave big ruts in the green grass, so far have broken 2 windows and can hit the ball about 100 ft, it’s getting better, I’m having a blast.
about flipping time you came back. I am in south Vic too… maybe we are nearby each other, and don’t even know it. Well… I remember why i love your writing. I am officially rehooked, and not so patiently awaiting the next chapter. I am guessing that bette is now dead from Shane’s shot…… so, you really are killing them one by one? hee hee… good plan, and I can’t wait to see who cops it next time. LOL post again soon, if you can…. and I hope that the accidents stop coming your way.
please somone comment or i will cry ….. or write me at: katya_114@hotmail.com
good chapter, although i think need to look at the previous chapters to follow the story. but please continue, i am interested to see what happens.
I was laughing my ass off. And yes, we Yankees understand centimeters and millimeters
Yay you’re back! It was as good as ever. Please post again soon…
Well I’m still here and I still love the story. Good Job.
DUUUUUDEEE!!! ur bak! hellz yea this is partly my fault! ur humour is too much sometimes seriously u crack me up, I love Bette gettin shot multiple times, having her as a weak charecter totally fits who she actually is (I realise I may get lynched for that comment!)
I mean this in the best way possible but hopefully u will take ur time healin.. dont wanna get bak in the fray too soon yunno, chill out a little let the creativity run free!! rite enuff yabberin.. Dana is still a hott bitch oh and wtf is Alice!!!! long live Marina!
See ya on the otherside LB MWAH!!
The amazing ladybiege is back!!! you have made my week! Great chapter, keep em coming!
ok so this is the first time I have read your story so why am I sitting laughing my ass off, I don’t know but this was some funny ass shit. I will be back to comment again after I read the story from the start, I hope you go on I hate when you get into a story and the writer goes MIA
mad crazy but i’m loving it, update soon.
Awesome…I just read all your posts and the story got better and better…glad to see you carried this one on…and I am gonna guess that Alice and Bette aren’t your favorite characters????…anyhow…keep it coming