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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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Sighing, Bette looked at Tina. “Obviously, I’m slightly impaired from the beers and that wine is tremendously potent, and I just woke up, plus, I really didn’t have my balance, and…”
“Doesn’t fly, Porter. This mattress doesn’t move. Your balance should be perfect. I think you’ve just lost your touch.”
“Humph. Have not.”
Tina leaned over her and whispered directly into her face. “Do you really want to fight about it?” Her grin was broad and toothy and Bette answered by simply shaking her head. “Didn’t think so.”
Bette’s heart was pounding hard. Tina looked at her with such love, such desire and Bette didn’t think she could take it. Suddenly, she felt overwhelmed. Her voice quivered as she said, “Tee, thank you for loving me still.”
“I do love you, Bette. I love you so much.”
Easily, the moment could have become reflective and sad. She could have let contrition and guilty feelings take over their first time, but Tina laid a scorcher on her that rocked her down to her toes. Tina bent over her, briefly moved her hands from Bette’s wrist and caressed her face. Her mouth moved closer and closer to Bette’s and ever so gently, but only for a moment, she pressed her lips against her partner’s. Then, with her tongue and the pressure of those soft lips, she pried Bette’s mouth open and moved her warm tongue inside it. Her kiss was strong and urgent. Her tongue pushed deep inside of Bette’s mouth, her nose rubbing and bumping against Bette’s, her hand warmly and lightly running over Bette’s cheek and down her neck. Her mouth moved away, leaving Bette reaching out with her tongue for any of Tina. Tina licked Bette’s face, her tongue slid up and down from temple to chin, then came right back to that hungry, lonely mouth for more kisses. Bette moaned.
Tina’s hands traveled to Bette’s hair and her fingers tangled in the wavy locks, curled around fistfuls of the long brown strands, massaged and tickled her head while kisses rained down on her. Bette’s arms went around Tina’s neck, then slid down her back, and back up. Tina slowly lowered her body, moving ever so smoothly down Bette’s legs.
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!