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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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Tina reached for the string of Bette’s pants and pulled the simple tie loose. As soon as she did, her hand found its way inside the pants, inside the thong. She gasped. “Oh my God. I don’t remember you ever being so wet. My God, you’re dripping.”
Bette bit her bottom lip, then released it. Her mouth opened wide as her head fell back. She groaned loudly. She bared her teeth, her mouth contorting and twisting in a grimace that showed a total loss of control. Bette panted and moaned as Tina’s fingers slid through Bette’s juices, stroking her wildly. Tina flipped Bette onto her back and yanked the pants down leaving on the little blue thong that was soaked through, the very center of it much darker now than the tiny string and widest part of the cloth. She stared down at Bette for a moment, overcome with the desire to love her, ***** her, eat her, kiss her, have her, take her. With one hand, Tina popped the front close of Bette’s bra and her ***** were released from their supportive covering. Bette’s ***** were perfectly round and firm. Dark brown nipples stood erect and inviting on top of the toffee-colored mounds. Tina bent and sucked hard and long while her fingers tried to caress her *****. But Bette was so wet that Tina’s fingers kept sliding off. Needing just a little more room to maneuver, Bette was stripped of her thong, too. While Tina alternated *****, laving one with her wet mouth than moving to the other side to taste that one, she used her middle finger and forefinger on either side of Bette’s ***** and rhythmically stroked her. She looked up at her lover who was lost in the passionate heat. Bette’s head was hitting the mattress bouncing up and down on it.
“You feel so good, Bette. I missed you.”
Bette grunted.
“What do you want?”
“***** me. ***** me, please,” she answered in a low, deep voice.
Tina easily slid two fingers inside of her lover. Bette grunted in pleasure. Bette grabbed two pillows and stuck them behind her back giving her those few extra inches she needed to reach Tina’s center with her hand. While Tina pushed deep inside of her, pushing against the thick patch of hot flesh, feeling Bette swell there and everywhere, Bette brought Tina closer to climax by fingering her *****.
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!