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“Bullshit!” Jodi was enraged and barked. “I saw that look! She wants you, bitch. The way she looks at you, huh.” She let out a cold snicker and picked up a needle, waving in the air. “See if she still wants you without this pretty little face.”
“Jodi!” Tina caught her arm. It was definitely not easy to get a hold on a person that temporarily lost her mind. With quite a struggle, she scrambled the sedation and quickly pushed a unit into Jodi’s exposed writhed vein. During the process, she noticed the needle points and bruises on the thin arm. And she understood that cocaine had the effect of neuron damage, which explained the emotional outburst and delusions.
Sooner than she expected, the sedation worked and the woman went limp in her bed. Exhausted, she slumped onto the sofa beside her, holding her head, she knew just taking care of Jodi would be a really hard job, let alone trying to gather information in this godawful place.
While she watched Jodi sleep and contemplating what to do next, their conversation, crazy it seemed, suddenly popped up in her head.
“Don’t you dare steal her away from me!”
“I saw that look! She wants you. The way she looks at you.”
Would this crazy woman be right about it? She almost felt Bette against her body just then and it was something so exciting, it shook her to her core.
But here she was, on a mission to bring justice and get these people locked up behind bars. That meant Bette would be one of them as well. This reality absolutely killed her. How could she get herself into this situation? Why was she even here? Which should she choose? Justice? Or…
Jorge was gathering his people for a meeting. On the outside he ran a delivery company that controlled most of the trucking for Mexican salsa sauce supplies for every Mexican restaurant in the central area. There were hundreds of cars running for him everyday and it made it perfectly convenient to transport other things. There in the living room, he was arranging the trucking for next month and assigning people to the jobs. Tina hid in the kitchen, making something for Jodi to eat and listening to their conversation.
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SO to the ladies who just broke my freaking twitter in the morning! You all crazy! But I still love you guys.
SassyGran, promise I’ll post very quickly. See? I’m staying up all night writing now.
Doc, haha Bette is not a tranny. That’ll be weird won’t it? Well, she has a guy’s name for some reason which I’ll explain later into the story.
LishaLove, hey thanks for the ideas! I’ll definitely think about them. And I’m so glad that you liked Round n Round We Go. I’ll try my best to not disappoint.
TN1, wkm, simonem, cellphone, bibi, mscully, I’m continuing! Thank you guys for the support! Don’t forget to leave me some comments and love. I’d love me some comments *batting eye lashes*
Peace :)
Ok, you now have me totally hooked on this story and this Tibette! Not to the extent that I will not keep reminding you of Lover in the Dark but ….
Please burn the midnight and post soon.
My twitter broke too!
SG,
I think the riot on twitter has affected you here in LesFan. LOL! Lover in the Dark is Phacey’s work. (Now I just suddenly remembered the scenes in TN1’s “The Dysfunctional..” Hi hi hi
Hahajahhahahha took the words out my mouth Scribe…ummm SG I think you had just about too many Cuppas lol
Oh sweety, here is a little love and hug for you;)
If it makes you update more and faster, i will give it to you freely and a lot more.
I think Eric/Henry is in big trouble and will be out before he knows what hit him.
Jodi, i didn’t like her in the show and she will give Tina a lot off trouble.
Bette, i can’t wait to hear more about her past and how she became ” Vincent”.
I am totally hooked.
Thanky you for the update.
I hope Bette is also under cover, love your story Thx
GM! Great post! I think Bette is either under cover or she is the Big Boss! Why would Bette say you are at the wrong person? Eric/Henry has being lying to the police force. He’s either starting his own side business(which he will be dead also) or he’s double crossing Pulpo. Something just ain’t right! I pray Tina and Bette stay safe. That damn Jobi has being faking all these years. I dislike that bitch so much. She’s going to be MAJOR trouble for Tina. Please keep her safe when she’s around her. PPS
I think it is also bette undercover cop and has better range than kennard
RT,
Yes we miss your “the lucky one” but when you are posting a story we know that we are not just settling for less coz u always make it a worthy one.
Congrats on this new story of your! Cheers!
Love,
Scribe
I too think Bette is undercover and that’s why she knows so much..but the part with Jodi digging her nails into Tina’s arm aarrgghh I was so ready to jump through this screen..and can we all say ewww Chlamydia just nasty Jodi tsk tsk
I am in agreement with the others…doesn’t matter the story, as long as it is from you, it’s a great one! I, too, am really hooked!!! I’m glad that Bette is still all woman (*sighing*)…yes, please explain the name. SG definitely added something special to her cuppa!
it really was a quick update, and I just now catching up to this story. but I loved it!
I’m glad that Bette no tranny, it would has been really bad. I’m sorry that Jodie is ill, but still doesn’t like her. I think she will be a great danger Tina.
I have so many questions, but I don’t want to bomb them to you :D
but please you give me more background Bette past.
I’m looking forward to the sequel!
The plot thickens. I decided Henry/Eric is up to no good and somehow Bette is a good guy. Loved it, thanks
you know I thought the original was pretty good itself, but your adaptation is amazing , more description of their emotions , that’s good,hope you can give us some NC -17,haha,coz it’s a pity the original skipped that.
So good, loving it
I sincerely hope that Bette is not really a criminal.
do not delay with new chapter.
5 stars .