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Bette looked over to him and got a nodding permission. She came near the hysterical woman, spoke to her softly and sat on the bed beside her. “Shhh, it’s alright. It’s ok, honey.”
“Vincent…” Jodi grabbed onto her sleeve like a drowning person.
“Yeah, yeah that’s me. Your Vincent is here. Shhh…” Bette didn’t try to get away this time. She let the woman cling onto her and nudge into the crook of her neck. Looking to her boss, she felt deeply sorry. Jodi wasn’t like this. She used to love Jorge with all her heart. But then the drug got in their way. She screwed herself up and started screwing around. At first Jorge could sympathize and understand, but his patient was wearing thin. For Jodi, he already murdered two men, and was ready to take out more. It was when she stepped in and temporarily occupied the crazed woman.
Seeing Bette so gentle with Jodi, hugging her close to her chest and patting and cooing, Tina suddenly felt a twitch in her stomach, a twitch so intense and hurtful that she had to look away. She looked sideway to see Jorge, and saw the sorrow in his unusually light colored eyes. The sorrow was familiar to her, she could relate to this sorrow. She didn’t know when, and why, but she actually felt something for these people. And it struck her hard at the moment…they were all human too, not just coldblooded murderers, but human beings with flesh and blood and broken hearts. What they were doing…was inexcusable. But at the same time, her heart hurt for them, all of them including herself.
Observant as always, Bette saw the mood change in those hazel eyes. Her heart pounded, in her chest and in her ears. It had not pounded like this in years.
Jodi had a smug smirk on while resting against her “Vincent”. She knew she was pathetic, holding onto a woman that didn’t love her back. But she just wanted her and she always got what she wanted. Now there was another woman that she could see Vincent wanted, so she hated this Ms. Kristen Dean for that.
Well into the night, Tina retired to her room, and paced around the place. This day had been harsh, exhausting and cruel for her. Until the mission was accomplished, there would be more days like this, more sleepless nights and heavy thoughts. Suddenly someone knocked on her door and she jumped. Cautiously opening a crack, she saw Henry standing outside, peeping around. She quickly let him in.
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SO to the ladies who just broke my freaking twitter in the morning! You all crazy! But I still love you guys.
SassyGran, promise I’ll post very quickly. See? I’m staying up all night writing now.
Doc, haha Bette is not a tranny. That’ll be weird won’t it? Well, she has a guy’s name for some reason which I’ll explain later into the story.
LishaLove, hey thanks for the ideas! I’ll definitely think about them. And I’m so glad that you liked Round n Round We Go. I’ll try my best to not disappoint.
TN1, wkm, simonem, cellphone, bibi, mscully, I’m continuing! Thank you guys for the support! Don’t forget to leave me some comments and love. I’d love me some comments *batting eye lashes*
Peace :)
Ok, you now have me totally hooked on this story and this Tibette! Not to the extent that I will not keep reminding you of Lover in the Dark but ….
Please burn the midnight and post soon.
My twitter broke too!
SG,
I think the riot on twitter has affected you here in LesFan. LOL! Lover in the Dark is Phacey’s work. (Now I just suddenly remembered the scenes in TN1’s “The Dysfunctional..” Hi hi hi
Hahajahhahahha took the words out my mouth Scribe…ummm SG I think you had just about too many Cuppas lol
Oh sweety, here is a little love and hug for you;)
If it makes you update more and faster, i will give it to you freely and a lot more.
I think Eric/Henry is in big trouble and will be out before he knows what hit him.
Jodi, i didn’t like her in the show and she will give Tina a lot off trouble.
Bette, i can’t wait to hear more about her past and how she became ” Vincent”.
I am totally hooked.
Thanky you for the update.
I hope Bette is also under cover, love your story Thx
GM! Great post! I think Bette is either under cover or she is the Big Boss! Why would Bette say you are at the wrong person? Eric/Henry has being lying to the police force. He’s either starting his own side business(which he will be dead also) or he’s double crossing Pulpo. Something just ain’t right! I pray Tina and Bette stay safe. That damn Jobi has being faking all these years. I dislike that bitch so much. She’s going to be MAJOR trouble for Tina. Please keep her safe when she’s around her. PPS
I think it is also bette undercover cop and has better range than kennard
RT,
Yes we miss your “the lucky one” but when you are posting a story we know that we are not just settling for less coz u always make it a worthy one.
Congrats on this new story of your! Cheers!
Love,
Scribe
I too think Bette is undercover and that’s why she knows so much..but the part with Jodi digging her nails into Tina’s arm aarrgghh I was so ready to jump through this screen..and can we all say ewww Chlamydia just nasty Jodi tsk tsk
I am in agreement with the others…doesn’t matter the story, as long as it is from you, it’s a great one! I, too, am really hooked!!! I’m glad that Bette is still all woman (*sighing*)…yes, please explain the name. SG definitely added something special to her cuppa!
it really was a quick update, and I just now catching up to this story. but I loved it!
I’m glad that Bette no tranny, it would has been really bad. I’m sorry that Jodie is ill, but still doesn’t like her. I think she will be a great danger Tina.
I have so many questions, but I don’t want to bomb them to you :D
but please you give me more background Bette past.
I’m looking forward to the sequel!
The plot thickens. I decided Henry/Eric is up to no good and somehow Bette is a good guy. Loved it, thanks
you know I thought the original was pretty good itself, but your adaptation is amazing , more description of their emotions , that’s good,hope you can give us some NC -17,haha,coz it’s a pity the original skipped that.
So good, loving it
I sincerely hope that Bette is not really a criminal.
do not delay with new chapter.
5 stars .